Question

英语高手，下面这个句子有误，帮我分析一下这个句子。谢谢

Brief as the vivid and lively cartoon is,it reveals the message that two...Disabled persons ,one is not with the left leg,the other one is not with the right leg,can go wherever they want.

Answer 1

Brief，as a vivid and lively cartoon, reveals the message that two...Disabled persons ,one of whom has lost his left leg and the other one his right leg ,can go wherever they want.
Brief作为一部生动的动画，向我们传达了这样一个道理，两个残疾人（一个人失去了左腿，另一个人失去了右腿）同样可以走遍世界。
。。。我是这样理解的。。。

Answer 2

want后面缺少一个to。因为是want to go whereever。

Answer 3

person属于单数名称，复数形式应该是people，所以persons是错误的。

Answer 4

the other 后面的one删除因为one ....the other是固定搭配