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It was cloudy , but we don't think it would rain. So our family drove to countryside for a picnic as planning. We parked near a river at noon, and then put all the food what we brought on the grass. We were making a fire while it began to rain. We rushed to a big tree nearly to take shelter. Unfortunate, the rain became more heavier. We had to give up the picnic and ran back to their car. We were very hungry at at that time, so we decided to have lunch on the car. We still had a lot of funs eating and chatting. It was really a special picnic.

Answer 1

1. don't think --didn't think (文章是叙述过去发生的事,故用过去式)
2. 在countryside前加 the: the countryside 农村/乡村
3. what we brought --that we brought或去掉what (what 不能做定从的关系代词,要用that)
4. while it began to rain中: while --when(while 只能同延续性动词连用;而when同延续性动词或非延续性动词连用, begin 为非延续性动词.因此用when)
5.a big tree nearly 中: nearly(将近)--nearby (附近的,作后置定语)
6. Unfortunate--Unfortunately 应用副词作状语
7.more heavier--much heavier(much+比较级,"...得多)
8. their car-- our car.(我们跑回"我们的"车)
9. on the car--in the car(在车里吃午餐)
10. funs--fun(fun为不可名)
注: We were very hungry at at that time.此句中多了一个at,可能是打字时多打了一个.

Answer 2

don't----didn't
our---my
countryside前面加the
planning---planned
what we brought中的what去掉，或改成that

while---when
nearly---nearby
Unfortunate---Unfortunately
more heavier----even heavier
their---our
funs---fun

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Answer 3

1,don't--didn't
2planning--planned
3what we brought中的what改成that
4while--when
5nearly--nearby
6Unfortunate--Unfortunately
7more heavier--much heavier
8their---our
9on the car--in the car
10funs---fun

Answer 4

It was cloudy , but we don't(didn't) think it would rain. So our family drove to (加上the)countryside for a picnic as planning(planned). We parked near a river at noon, and then put all the food what(that) we brought on the grass. We were making a fire while(when) it began to rain. We rushed to a big tree nearly(nearby) to take shelter. Unfortunate(Unfortunately), the rain became more(much) heavier. We had to give up the picnic and ran back to their(our) car. We were very hungry at at(题目打错？多了一个at) that time, so we decided to have lunch on(in) the car. We still had a lot of funs(fun) eating and chatting. It was really a special picnic.