Question

下面这段话怎么翻译？谢谢！

原文：
随着我国对外交流的深入发展，商务英语口语在国际经济交流中起着越来越重要的作用，对商务英语类的人才需求量越来越大，要求也越来越高。但是目前大部分商务英语专业毕业生存在着应试水平强，实际运用能力较弱的情况，与现实需求还存在着一定的差距，在一定程度上影响了我国国际商务的交流与发展。
这是我的译文：With the in~depth development of international communication, oral business English is becoming increasingly important in international economical communication, there is larger and larger vacancy for people who is study business English, and the requirement become higher than before. Most of business English graduated students are good at texts, but not good at put it into practical, there still has a long distance with current needs, it influenced our exchanges and development of international business activities at a certain extent.
有什么需要改的地方？请指点！

Answer 1

Along with our country foreign exchange in-depth development, business English in international economic exchange plays an increasingly important role, for business English talents demand is bigger and bigger, requirements are also getting higher and higher. But most of the current business English major graduates have different levels of strong, practical application ability weak situation and actual demand, there is still a certain gap, to a certain extent has affected our country international business communication and development

Answer 2

With the in-depth development of China's foreign exchange, business English spoken plays an increasingly important role in international economic exchanges, growing talent demand Business English class, are increasingly high requirements. But most business English graduates there are exam-oriented level, the actual ability to use the weaker, there is still a certain gap with the real needs, to some extent affected the exchange and development of our international business.