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Failing to Take Proper Measures to Protect The Environment
As the industrial society becomes more and more modernized, to protect the living environment has been already the obligatory responsibility for every individual.
However, there are still a lot of people fail to keeping that in mind, either from industry or just normal life.
A lot of factories, which are producing the high-tec modern products aiming to facilitate people's life, are on the contrary doing harm to our nature world. They don't care about how to deal with the waste out of the product and finally pollutions are found out almost in every rivers and lakes.
In the normal life, there are still restaurants in which the wood-made chopsticks and plastic bags could be discoverred. Same phenomena is from the big supermarket. Even though you have to pay for the plastic bags, who care about 1 RMB when it comes to the protection of environment?
The spring is coming and flowers and green trees start growing out again. However, we should not be masked by the out-looking of the city and should protect our living environment from every single point of our normal life. 展开
As the industrial society becomes more and more modernized, to protect the living environment has been already the obligatory responsibility for every individual.
However, there are still a lot of people fail to keeping that in mind, either from industry or just normal life.
A lot of factories, which are producing the high-tec modern products aiming to facilitate people's life, are on the contrary doing harm to our nature world. They don't care about how to deal with the waste out of the product and finally pollutions are found out almost in every rivers and lakes.
In the normal life, there are still restaurants in which the wood-made chopsticks and plastic bags could be discoverred. Same phenomena is from the big supermarket. Even though you have to pay for the plastic bags, who care about 1 RMB when it comes to the protection of environment?
The spring is coming and flowers and green trees start growing out again. However, we should not be masked by the out-looking of the city and should protect our living environment from every single point of our normal life. 展开
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Failing to Take Proper Measures to Protect The Environment
As the industrial society becomes more and more modernized, protecting the living environment has already been the obligatory responsibility for every individual.
However, there are still a lot of people who fail to keep that in mind, whether it is with regard to the industries, or with regard to our daily lives.
A lot of factories, which are producing the high-tec modern products aiming to facilitate people's life, are on the contrary, doing harm to our nature world. They don't care about how to deal with the waste products and pollution is now evident in almost every river and lake.
In the normal life, there are still restaurants in which wood-made chopsticks and plastic bags can be found. The same phenomenon can be seen in the big supermarkets. Even though you have to pay for the plastic bags, who cares about 1 RMB when it comes to the protection of environment?
Spring is coming and flowers and green trees start growing out again. However, we should not be fooled by the appearance of the city and should protect our living environment from every single aspect in our daily life.
我改的地方：
第一个句子里，To protect 改成了protecting.
Has been already 改成了 has already been.
第二个句子里，fail to keeping that in mind 改成了Who fail to keep that in mind.
either from industry or just normal life. 改成了whether it is with regard to the industries, or with regard to our daily lives.
第四个句子里，waste out of the product 改成了 waste products.
finally pollutions are found out almost in every rivers and lakes. 改成了，Pollution is now evident in almost every river and lake.
第五个句子里，In the normal life 改成了，In daily life.
in which the wood-made chopsticks and plastic bags could be discovered. 改成了 In which wood-made chopsticks and plastic bags can be found.
第六个句子里，Same phenomena is from the big supermarket. 改成了，The same phenomenon can be seen in the big supermarkets.
第七个句子里，who care about 改成了 who cares about
第八个句子里，The spring 改成了 Spring
第九个句子里，However, we should not be masked by the out-looking of the city 改成了 However, we should not be fooled by the appearance
from every single point of our normal life. 改成了 From every single aspect in our daily life.
现在语法应该都对了. 希望对你有帮助！
As the industrial society becomes more and more modernized, protecting the living environment has already been the obligatory responsibility for every individual.
However, there are still a lot of people who fail to keep that in mind, whether it is with regard to the industries, or with regard to our daily lives.
A lot of factories, which are producing the high-tec modern products aiming to facilitate people's life, are on the contrary, doing harm to our nature world. They don't care about how to deal with the waste products and pollution is now evident in almost every river and lake.
In the normal life, there are still restaurants in which wood-made chopsticks and plastic bags can be found. The same phenomenon can be seen in the big supermarkets. Even though you have to pay for the plastic bags, who cares about 1 RMB when it comes to the protection of environment?
Spring is coming and flowers and green trees start growing out again. However, we should not be fooled by the appearance of the city and should protect our living environment from every single aspect in our daily life.
我改的地方：
第一个句子里，To protect 改成了protecting.
Has been already 改成了 has already been.
第二个句子里，fail to keeping that in mind 改成了Who fail to keep that in mind.
either from industry or just normal life. 改成了whether it is with regard to the industries, or with regard to our daily lives.
第四个句子里，waste out of the product 改成了 waste products.
finally pollutions are found out almost in every rivers and lakes. 改成了，Pollution is now evident in almost every river and lake.
第五个句子里，In the normal life 改成了，In daily life.
in which the wood-made chopsticks and plastic bags could be discovered. 改成了 In which wood-made chopsticks and plastic bags can be found.
第六个句子里，Same phenomena is from the big supermarket. 改成了，The same phenomenon can be seen in the big supermarkets.
第七个句子里，who care about 改成了 who cares about
第八个句子里，The spring 改成了 Spring
第九个句子里，However, we should not be masked by the out-looking of the city 改成了 However, we should not be fooled by the appearance
from every single point of our normal life. 改成了 From every single aspect in our daily life.
现在语法应该都对了. 希望对你有帮助！
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As the industrial society becomes more and more modernized, to protect the living environment has already been the obligatory responsibility for every individual.
However, there are still a lot of people fail to keep that in mind, either from industry or just daily life.
A lot of factories, which are producing the high-tech modern products aiming to improve our lifes, are on the contrary doing harm to our nature world. They don't care about how to deal with the waste out of the products. Finally pollutions are found in almost every river and every lake.
In the daily life, there are restaurants which is still using the wood-made chopsticks and plastic bags. Same phenomena is from the big supermarkets. Even though you have to pay for the plastic bags, who care about 1 RMB when it comes to the protection of environment?
The spring is coming and flowers and green trees start growing out again. However, we should not be masked by the out-looking of the city and should protect our living environment from every single point of our daily life.
稍微改了几处。
However, there are still a lot of people fail to keep that in mind, either from industry or just daily life.
A lot of factories, which are producing the high-tech modern products aiming to improve our lifes, are on the contrary doing harm to our nature world. They don't care about how to deal with the waste out of the products. Finally pollutions are found in almost every river and every lake.
In the daily life, there are restaurants which is still using the wood-made chopsticks and plastic bags. Same phenomena is from the big supermarkets. Even though you have to pay for the plastic bags, who care about 1 RMB when it comes to the protection of environment?
The spring is coming and flowers and green trees start growing out again. However, we should not be masked by the out-looking of the city and should protect our living environment from every single point of our daily life.
稍微改了几处。
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Failing to Take Proper Measures to Protect The Environment
As the industrial society becomes more and more modernized, protecting the living environment has become the obligatory responsibility for every individual.
However, there are still a lot of people failing to to keep that in mind, either from the industry or just the normal life.
A lot of factories that produce high-tech modern products aiming to improve people's life, are on the contrary doing harm to our nature world. They don't care about how to deal with the waste products and as a result causing pollutions everywhere, rivers and lakes.
In normal life, there are still restaurants where wooden chopsticks and plastic bags could be found. Same phenomena is seen in the big supermarket. Even though you have to pay for the plastic bags that cost about 1 RMB when it comes to the protection of environment?
The spring is coming and flowers and green trees start growing again. However, we should not be masked by the out-look of the city and should protect our environment from every single point of our normal life.
As the industrial society becomes more and more modernized, protecting the living environment has become the obligatory responsibility for every individual.
However, there are still a lot of people failing to to keep that in mind, either from the industry or just the normal life.
A lot of factories that produce high-tech modern products aiming to improve people's life, are on the contrary doing harm to our nature world. They don't care about how to deal with the waste products and as a result causing pollutions everywhere, rivers and lakes.
In normal life, there are still restaurants where wooden chopsticks and plastic bags could be found. Same phenomena is seen in the big supermarket. Even though you have to pay for the plastic bags that cost about 1 RMB when it comes to the protection of environment?
The spring is coming and flowers and green trees start growing again. However, we should not be masked by the out-look of the city and should protect our environment from every single point of our normal life.
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