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wheniwasfouryearsoldigotill.itookmedicinetwiceaday.themedicinehadsoabittertastethatit... when i was four years old i got ill.i took medicine twice a day.the medicine had so a bitter taste that i took it mixed in orange juice .the problen was that i can still taste the medicine .in a particular afternoon my mother brought the drink in.as she gave it to me,when the phone rang and decided i couldn't face then ,so i hid the glass behind a pile magazines.ofcourse,when my mother was asked ,"have you already taken your medicine?"i said,"yes.:i felt very pleased with me.the next day,my mother found drink when she was doing the housework.she looked at me serious and said,"it's bad to tell lies!" 展开
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第一行 so 改成such
第二行in改成with ,taste改成smell
第三行when去掉, decided 前面加上I
第四行 pile后面加of, was去掉
第五行me改成myself
第六行在found后面加the
serious改成seriously
当我四岁的时候,我生病了,一天吃2次药。那药非常的苦,我就混着果汁吃下去。问题是混着果汁还是能闻到药味道,一天下午妈妈把果汁拿进来,当她把药给我的时候,电话响了,我当时觉得吃不下,所以我决定把药藏在了一堆杂志后面。当然,当妈妈问我吃药了没有,我说吃了。当时我非常高兴。第二天妈妈打扫卫生的时候发现了果汁,她严肃的看着我,并且说:说谎是很不好的。
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你少打了几句,我帮你弄全了并且保证答案的准确性。 When I was four years old,I got ill.I took medicine twice a day. The medicine had so (改为such)a bitter taste that I took it mixed in orange juice. The problem was that I can (改为could )still taste the medicine. In (改为On )a particular afternoon,my mother brought the drink in. As she gave it to me,when(去掉when) the phone rang and she went to answer it. I looked at the orange drink and decided I couldn’t face them (改为it). So I hid the glass behind a pile (加上of)magazines. Of course,when my mother was(去掉was) asked,“Have you already taken your medicine?” I said,“Yes".I felt very pleased with me(改为myself). The next day,my mother found (加上the)drink when she was doing the housework.She looked at me serious (改为seriously )and said,“It’s bad to tell lies!
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