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用英语写一篇题为 “Top Meal of the D...

用英语写一篇题为 “Top Meal of the Day”的短文。 原因 晚上学习太晚，不吃早饭可多睡一会。家长太忙，给钱让孩子自己解决。有些女孩子为保持苗条身材不吃早餐。  结果 课堂上睡觉。注意力下降。考试成绩不理想。  建议 早餐不可少，提供全天所需能量的30％，有助于提高学习效率。 注意：1.词数：120左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.不要逐字翻译，要点可适当发挥。 3.参考词汇：苗条的slim Top Meal of the Day A recent survey shows that nearly 30% of the students in our school do not have breakfast __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Top
Meal
of
the
Day
A
recent
study
shows
that
nearly
50
percent
of
the
school
"kids
in
Beijing
do
not
have
breakfast.They
tend
to
feel
sleepy
all
day
and
have
bad
memories,
so
it
is
hard
for
them
to
get
high
marks
in
all
kinds
of
test.Some
students
who
study
late
into
the
night
choose
to
miss
breakfast
so
that
they
can
have
a
few
extra
minutes
in
bed.
Others
are
given
money
to
buy
their
breakfast
on
the
way
to
school
because
their
parents
are
too
busy
to
prepare
it
for
them.
In
addition,
a
few
schoolgirls
want
to
stay
slim
and
often
go
to
school
without
breakfast.
In
fact,
the
morning
meal
plays
an
important
part.
It
can
provide
30
percent
of
the
whole
day’s
energy.
For
a
creative
mind
and
better
judgment,
school
kids
should
start
their
day
with
a
regular
breakfast.
【答案解析】试题分析：考查提纲式作文：这篇文章的话题是“Top
Meal
of
the
Day”，提纲是以表格的形式给出的，写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
【亮点说明】They
tend
to
feel
sleepy
all
day
and
have
bad
memories,
so
it
is
hard
for
them
to
get
high
marks
in
all
kinds
of
test.这句话有宾语从句和it做形式主语的句型，
Some
students
who
study
late
into
the
night
choose
to
miss
breakfast
so
that
they
can
have
a
few
extra
minutes
in
bed.
这句话用了定语从句和so
that引导结果状语从句，Others
are
given
money
to
buy
their
breakfast
on
the
way
to
school
because
their
parents
are
too
busy
to
prepare
it
for
them.
这句话用了原因状语从句和too…to….句型，
the
morning
meal
plays
an
important
part.这句话用了词组“play
an
important
role
in”，这篇文章还使用了
In
addition,
In
fact,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查提纲类短文