Question

谁可以帮忙写一篇水平较高的英语作文——My first date

Answer 1

Cherry blossom trees are trembling in cool breeze, petals are flying in the air, and beams of colorful neon lights are shining through the sky. I am amazed at the perfect combination of natural environment and modern society here. An April night in Tokyo is such a deadly beauty!
At this moment right here, I feel I am the happiest woman in the world, because I am accompanied with my lover Khalil Fong. Hah, you may be curious about how we know each other and become lovers. But I have to tell you the truth——I have no idea! I couldn’t remember how we met each other at the first time, and how we felt such great affection for each other. The only important thing to me is that I am with him. I have a romantic relationship with him. It is our first date. And I know this sweet relationship will make all of my girl friends jealous.
Until I die, I will never forget what we have done today: At the news conference of his new album, he found an excuse and told his agent that he wanted to go to toilet; actually, he slipped into a pool of his fans to find me out. He clenched my hands to pull me out of the room. Then, we flew to here. Right here in Shinjuku. We ran through the busy streets hand in hand, ignoring others on the streets. We laughed and ran along until we got tired. He invited me to have dinner with him. I had the most delicious and haunting sushi feast ever. He composed a song especially for me. We lent a guitar form a group of strolling artists and sang the song under the cherry blossom trees in Hibiya Park. Strangers passed us by and smiled to us. I know they were affected by our strong emotions.
At around eleven o’clock, we climbed over the fence, broke into an amusement park, and had a long walk along the river. He said he would give me a surprise gift. So, I waited patiently.
As the clock strikes twelve times, I feel the touch of his soft lips. We are getting closer and closer. Now I feel I am Cinderella who is about to receive the prince’s love. “Wait,” he suddenly stops approaching. “let me show you my most precious gift.” I’m so touched that my eyes are brimming with sweet tears. At the moment, he begins to trip off something, first his shirt, his jeans, his shoes, and then he pulls down his face. It is just a peeled skin. And a young woman’s voice comes from his throat, “I love you. I fall in love with you at first sight.” Then, he continues peeling his skin…screaming…yelling…running…hugging…kissing…

Answer 2

My first date
Nobody believes that I have never had a boyfriend in 20 years of my life. Well, some of them even suggest me to see psychologist, some of them question about my sexual orientation. I know they were joking. My repsonse is I am a very picky person.

Today, I accomplished my first official date. Here is my story goes.

I knew him more than 6 months, but never met him. Yes, we met on the internet, but don't get me wrong here, I had no intention for further development to begin with. He rang me this afternoon, and I had no expectation whatsoever. I was shocked when he started speaking Chinese to me. I know he could speak some Chinese, but didn't know he could keep the whole conversation flowing. He said he is in town, asked me if I could drive down to see him. I said ok. After I got the address and direction from him, I realized it would be an hour driving from where I was, even longer because of the rush hour.
...... An hour and 45 minutes later, I ended up somewhere in downtown. He was standing on the sidewalk, and giving me the direction on the phone. The first impression- he wore glasses, I never saw him with glasses. We stopped by the grocery store, he picked up some Qingdao Beer. He was really careful about it. He let me wait him outside, he wouldn't even let me hold the beer for him, because I am still under 21.
Then we sat behind his house, facing to the waterway. We talked so much I couldn't even recall every detail right now. One thing for sure, he loves China so much, which is good. It created a lot of common topic between us. There was some awkward moments as well, both of us were silent, had nothing to say......
It was getting dark, and the clouds were moving above us. I decided to leave. He really wants me to come back again. I said maybe, I really don't like drive this far, and spent money on gas.

I am kind of confused now. I have never been that confused in my life. No wander my best girl friend told me don't start to date until you are 30 after she had her first. Haha, is it true? I felt pretty good tonight. Am I really falling this time or it is just illusion?