Question

English Sentence correction!

As shown in the figure 3, there are two football grounds surrounded by trees for
public use at the central of lawn and also a monument locates between them for
recording the team name of championship.

Answer 1

个人见解如下：
1. the figure 3 似乎无需 the 字，因为 figure 3 本身已经很明确是指那一幅图了。
2. at the central of lawn 按现时字面的意思是指“草坪的中央”，但我估计楼主是想指“中央草坪”。如果楼主是所说“草坪的中央”，则建议楼主把 "at the central of lawn" 改为 "at the center of the lawn" ，因为 central 是作为形容词使用较多。虽然也见过把 central 当作名词用的情况，但都是特殊用法，而且不会在後面跟个 of。
3. recording the team name of championship 中的 "the team name of championship" 这个说法看起来有点怪。建议改为 "names of champion teams"。另外，recording 是怎麼个记录法呢？是不是刻在纪念碑上？如果是，建议改用 inscribe 代替 recording，因为会比较具体和清楚。若果楼主也不知道详细，亦可以考虑用 mark 字代替 recording，因为 recording 总带一点点“收藏起来的记录”那种味道。

纵合上述，我建议楼主把原句改成下面那样：

As shown in Figure 3, there are two football grounds surrounded by trees for
public use at the centre of the lawn; and between them a monument is also located, on which names of the champion teams are inscribed.

Answer 2

As shown in the figure 3, there are two football grounds surrounded by trees for
public use at the central of lawn and also a monument is located between them for
recording the team name of championship.

Answer 3

As shown in the figure 3, surrounded by trees, there are two public football grounds at the central lawn and also a monument is located between them, which is a place to memorize the championship teams.