Question

这句英语翻译是否正确？

我昨天在上周刚修好的购物中心内买了她最喜欢的钻戒.
I bought the diamond ring that she best likes yesterday in the shopping mall built last week.
请问以上这句话翻译是否有问题？另外请问如下：
① yesterday 在句子中属于什么语句，什么成分. 可否放到句子结尾？还是说句中句尾都可以？
② in the shopping mall 在句子中属于什么语句，什么成分？
谢谢。

Answer 1

没有大的问题，基本意思差不多

Answer 2

I bought her favorite diamond ring in the shopping center just repaired last week yesterday。

Answer 3

I bought her her favorite diamond ring yesterday in the shopping mall that just opened last week.

Answer 4

我昨天在上周刚修好的购物中心内买了她最喜欢的钻戒。
这么翻译：
I bought her favorite diamond ring yesterday in the shopping mall which was just opened in the last week.
不要用那种画蛇添足的：that she likes best 之类的从句。