Question

能不能帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误

One of the books that i like best is The Little Prince.It is a fairy tale,many of adults are crazy about the book.It created by a French writer called Antoine.The hero the little prince experenced various adventures while he embarked from own planet to earth.On each planet,the prince meeted a different type of adult and reveals that character's frivolities and weaknesses.Though ostensibly a children'book,the book makes several profound and idealistic observations about life and human nature.Be pure,be sincere and be happy,it is what the book taught me.

Answer 1

It is a fairy tale which many of adults are crazy about
It was created by a French writer called Antoine.
from his own planet to earth.
meeted-- met adult s
being pure,sincere and happy is what the book taught me.

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请问 the prince met a different type of adults 就对了吗？

Answer 2

.It created by a French writer called Antoine.被动语态少了个was.
The book was written by Antoine, a French writer .
On each planet,the prince meeted a different type of adult and reveals ……如果meet要用过去时，应该是met
，而且meet和reveal的时态应该一样。
语法方面，我只知道这么多了。

Answer 3

应该有吧！不知道是不是我没学好，我觉得这句The hero the little prince experenced various adventures while he embarked from own planet to earth.

Answer 4

没问题