Question

高二英语短文改错，9个错误。I was 14 years old when my father died.

I was 14 years old when my father died.He was our mainly source of income.From then on,we have severe financial problems and struggled to pay for food and basic education.That situation forced my two sisters and me discontinue our education for three years after the college entrnce eam.Despite of our challenges,our mother always believed in us and told us we would both become successful and respected citizens.My mother's words encouraged us to face life with a less active attitude.Now,10 years later,all of us have completed our education or become successful individuals.So I believe everyone need have a bright future,as long as he or she make efforts,taking an opttimistic view of life.

Answer 1

1.mainly是副词，改为main形容词
2.From then on,we have severe... have改为had
3. force to do，discontinue前加to
4.respected前加been 受尊重，要被动
5.less 去掉，结合语意应该是积极的态度
6.or改为and
7.need去掉
8.make加s
9.前面的despite of 去掉of 意思尽管，加of就是不管，不顾了 意思不通
不知对不对