Question

能帮我看下这篇英语作文是否有错误吗?

My favorite kind of dish is cucumber salad.Actually,the dish is not so delicious.but it still has a special significance to me.I have been staying in Beijing for 3 months.Homesickness like a stubborn illness make me feel confused.By accident,I found I could do the dish which my mom had taught me.Maybe it will be a good medicine to me.Therefor,I came to supermarket to buy something i need.Cuting the cucumber and adding the seasoning to the dish.The work is not as difficult as I thought.When I tasted it for the first time,i can't hold back tears anymore.It is too good to be true.Cucumber salad makes me feel at home.
另外，能否把某些句子改的更地道些 谢谢！

Answer 1

the dish is not so delicious. so 一般不这么用，换成very或者really更好。Homesickness like a stubborn illness make me feel confused.这句里面like a stubborn illness 用来修饰主语，主语是个单数名词，make是谓语，要加s。
Maybe it will be a good medicine to me.这一句，如果你是在当时这么思考的话，应该是过去时，will改为would。
therefor——therefore
Cuting the cucumber and adding the seasoning to the dish.这一句缺主语哦~，要么在句首加 I ，后面为cut和added，要么句号改为逗号，后面加一句有主语的句子。
The work is ——was
i can't hold back tears anymore.这一句前面的分句是过去时，can't改为couldn't。
最后一句at home有点生硬，可以改成the warmth of home.
这篇文章写的很好啊，每个细节都很生动。基本没什么改动。就一些小地方。加油吧

追问

Cuting the cucumber and adding the seasoning to the dish, 这句如果不变,请问后面加个什么合适,可以帮我想一下吗?谢谢你

追答

比如可以加一个“我想起了和母亲在一起(快乐)的时光”，I remembered the times with my mother , (which were full of happiness)，之类的都可以。

Answer 2

没