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I'msorryfornotwritetoyouearlier.It'sovertwomonthswhenyoureturnedtoyourcountry.Imissyo... I'm sorry for not write to you earlier.It's over two months when you returned to your country.I miss you and our good older days.Last week our school held the English speech contest.I won first prize!This again remind me of all your kind help.Do you remember the bicycle we bought it toghter?It was stolen yesterday.How a sad thing!Your dog Sharp is taken good care.Every afternoon I exercise him,but don't worry about him.How is everything with you recent ?Please write to me when you have time.
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I'm sorry for not write (writing) to you earlier.It's over two months when (since) you returned to your country.I miss you and our good older days.Last week our school held the English speech contest.I won (加上the) first prize!This again remind (reminded) me of all your kind help.Do you remember the bicycle we bought ( 去掉it ) toghter?It was stolen ye sterday. How(What) a sad thing!Your dog Sharp is taken good care (of).Every afternoon I exercise (with)him,(去掉but )don't worry about him.How is everything with you recent(recently) ?Please write to me when you have time.
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1write -writing for是介词,后加上动词ing,sorry for (not)doing为(没有)做了什么事情而抱歉

2when -since it is some time since+从句 自从发生...之后已经有....时间了

3won(插入the)first first这种序数词之前要加入定冠词the

4remind-reminded 注意时态哦,是过去时
5we bought (去掉it) 前面已经有提到是bicyc,后面再用就重复了

6How-What what a sad thing!=how sad thing it is!考察感叹句的用法.
7good care(加上of) take care of 是固定词组,表示"照顾"

8exercise(加上with) exercise是不及物动词,加上with就是 和...一起锻炼

9but-so 用so表示承接

10recent-recently recent是副词,表示最近.

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I'm sorry for not (write改成writing) to you earlier. It's over two months (when改成since) you returned to your country. I miss you and our good older days. Last week our school held (the改成an) English speech contest. I won first prize! This again (remind改成remineded) me of all your kind help. Do you remember the bicycle we bought (去掉it) together? It was stolen yesterday. (How改成What) a sad thing! Your dog Sharp is taken good care (加入of). Every afternoon I exercise (加入with) him, (but改成and) don't worry about him. How is everything with you (recent改成recenlty) ?Please write to me when you have time.
All the best!

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