Question

英文改错！有10个错！快来

This is my first time to write an English e- mail. I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment, After the school, I ran to but it.So far I bought two issues. I like every editor in you magazine, Learning with them always make me happy. Next month I will challenge me to read an advanced magazine. So I will also buy your magazine, read two magazines at the same time. I think this will help me ger through my spare time meanful.
best wish to all of you.

Answer 1

This is my first time to write an English e- mail. I came across your maganize about two months
before(改为ago) and I loved it from the firest(改为first) moment, After the school, I ran to but(改为buy) it.So far I (加上have) bought two issues. I like every editor in you（改为your) magazine, Learning with them always make(改为makes) me happy. Next month I will challenge me(改为myself) to read an advanced magazine. So I will also buy your magazine, read(改为reading) two magazines at the same time. I think this(改为it) will help me (加上to) ger(改为get) through my spare time meanful(改为meaningfully).

best wish(改为wishes) to all of you.

Answer 2

改正如下（错误在括号处注明）：
This is my first time to write an English e-mail. I came across your magazine about two months (before改成ago) and I loved it from the first moment...
解释：about two months before这种结构是指从过去某一时刻往前推算大约两个月，其做时间状语的句子的时态只能使用过去完成时，而不能使用一般过去时。
所以，必须把before改成ago。
about two months ago是指从现在往前推算大约两个月，句子必须使用一般过去时。