Question

求助大家帮我写篇英文作文吧~这是一篇英语四级的作文！~我感激不尽了~！

作文内容：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Free admission to museums. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
　1. 越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？
2. 也会带来一些问题
3. 你的看法？

Answer 1

Nowadays, more and more museums are open for tourists to visit for free. Visitors are allowed to enter many museums without any ticket and fee. The purpose is to attract more foreign tourists and local visitors. By doing so, there will be both advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, attracting more visitors can raise people's awareness of local cultures and values. It can also win the reputation for the museums and enhance the popularity. On the other hand, a coin has two sides. Too many visitors may cause many problems. The most serious problem is that it is very hard to manage so many visitors. Since some museums are not large enough, they may not be able to contain so many people. It is even more difficult to protect valuable things in museums because visitors may be careless and destroy something. In my opinion, it is necessary to raise people's awareness on local culture. Museums can employ more workers to protect valuable things. (163字)

追问

他好像是要求120字一下的，是不是太多了点？

追答

大学四级的要求是120-180字，如果时间来不及的话可以帮你删减一下。
Nowadays, more and more museums are open for tourists to visit for free. The purpose is to attract more foreign tourists and local visitors. By doing so, there will be both advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, attracting more visitors can raise people's awareness of local cultures and values. It can also win the reputation for the museums and enhance the popularity. On the other hand, a coin has two sides. Too many visitors may cause many problems. It is very hard to manage so many visitors. Since some museums are not large enough, they may not be able to contain so many people. It is even more difficult to protect valuable things in museums because visitors may be careless and destroy something. In my opinion, it is necessary to raise people's awareness on local culture. Museums can employ more workers to protect valuable things. (145字)