Question

帮忙修改一下英语作文 ，特别是里面的语法错误！！！

In the story dream is very important to
different character, they have all kind of different dreams, and dreams also
gives them kind of different motives. Dreams seems more important to nobody who
at the lower class, it keeps poor workers to face future and difficult, they
believe that hard work makes a difference; someday, their dreams will come
true.

Answer 1

In the story, a dream is very important to different characters, who have all kinds of dreams and dreams also give them different motives. Dreams seem more important to those people who are living in a lower class. It makes poor workers face the difficulty and meet the future because they believe that hard work makes a difference and someday, their dreams will come true.
分析：
1. Dream是个可数名词，对于可数名词有两种情况@1 冠词+名词单数 @2名词复数；所以，a dream 或dreams
2. all kinds of 各种各样的；意思与different重复，故择其一而用之。
3. 在某个社会阶层，多用介词In
4. Keep doing sth。 Make sb do.

Answer 2

In the story dream is very important to
different character, they have all kind(kinds) of different dreams, and dreams also
gives(give) them kind (kinds) of different motives. Dreams seems (seem) more important to nobody who
at the lower class, it keeps poor workers to face( facing) future and difficult, they
believe that hard work makes a difference; someday, their dreams will come
true.

Answer 3

In the story, dreams are very important to
different characters. They have different dreams, and dreams give them different motives. Dreams seem more important to the ones who
are in the lower class, and they keep poor workers facing future difficulty. They
believe that hard work makes a difference; someday, their dreams will come
true.

Answer 4

In the story it tells us dream is very important to
different characters. People who have different kinds of dreams
give themselves different motives. Dream seems more important to those who
are at lower class. It keeps poor workers' hope to face difficulty and look forward to future. They
believe that hard work makes a difference. Their dreams will come
true someday.

Answer 5

In the story, dreams are very important to different characters, they dreamed different kinds of dreams, dreams also gives the character different kinds of motives. Dreams seem more important to no one, who, is at the lower class, it'll keep thepoor workers to face the future and the difficulties, they believe that hard working will make a difference; someday, theirdreams will come true.