Question

根据下面信息帮我写篇英语作文啊！！English teacher help me！！！！

今天是周日，是玛利亚的生日，假如你是吉尔，你收到了玛利亚给你的生日聚会邀请卡，并去参加了她的生日会，你送给他一顶帽子作为礼物，生日集会上大家玩得很开心 你告诉玛利亚你的生日是12月6日，希望她也能来参加你的生日聚会
Maria's 13th Birthday!
November 11th ,2012 5:00 pm
McDonald's Restaurant No.106 XXX Road
Food and cakes
Drinks
Games & Activities!

Answer 1

你好！

Today is Sunday. It is also Maria's thirteenth birthday. I received the birthday party invitation weeks ago and decided to buy a cap for her. It had bobbles on top and was baby blue in colour. The party was held in the evening from five onwards. The party was held in Mcdonald's restaurant No. 106 XXX Road. The food and drinks served there was amazing. There was a wide variety and each was as delicious as the next. Games were played before the blowing out of the candles on the birthday cake. There was even a pinata we all had turn at trying to break with a stick. The birthday girl did it and we feasted on the cadies hidden in the pinata. We had great fun and Maria was delighted at how successful her party was. After the party, I invited her to my birthday party which would be held on the sixth of November.

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追问

40词左右就可以啦！！简单点，要不不像我写的。。。

追答

Today is Sunday, Maria's thirteenth birthday. I received the birthday party invitation weeks ago and decided to buy a cap for her. It had bobbles on top and was baby blue in colour. The party was held in the evening from five onwards. The food and drinks served was of a wide variety. Games were also played. We had great fun and Maria was delighted at her party's success. After the party, I invited her to my birthday party which would be held on the sixth of November.

再短就没内容了。>.<

追问

能不能简单点，我才初一，你这篇很多词我都没学

追答

不明白什么？我尽量减。

追问

我们没学过去式，你尽量再写简单点吧

追答

Today is Sunday, Maria's thirteenth birthday. I bought a cap for her. It was baby blue in colour. The party was held from five onwards. There was a variety of food and drinks. Games were also played. We had great fun and Maria was delighted. After the party, I invited her to my birthday party held on the sixth of November this year.

行吗？

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Today is sunday ,and it is maria's birthday .i buy him a hat and go to join his birthday party . it is so wonderful ,we are very happy there play many games and i tell maria about my birthday ,it is on 6th Dec,and i hope she can come and join my brithday party then .