Question

英语短文改错

Mr Grey was a biology professor ,and he had a big collection of rare bones which he was very pround. one year he managed to get a new and better at an university .as Mr Grey was very busy ,his wife made the arrangements for her possessions to be taken in a moving van to their new home while he was away from work .the following week three men started out take the things out of Mr Grey 's house and loading them into the van as one of them brought out a large wood box .he is just about to throw it into the van wuth all the other things when Mrs Grey ran out from her house and said ,"please treat that box very gentle .that one has all my husband's bones in it"the man was so surprised that he nearly deopped the box on his feet.

Answer 1

第一句，proud后面加of。
第二句better后面应该少了什么。
start out后面是直接接动词原形吗？如果是的话那后面应该用load而不是loading。后面的as one of them的as是不是用对了我不太清楚。下一句的he is about to ……应该用he was about to,还有with也打错了。
please treat that box very gentle ，应该用gently，不用very gentle
下一句that one has应改为there are
dropped，不是deopped
还有每一句的开头第一个单词的首字母记得要大写
有些句子没有必要写那么长，完全可以分成两句写。有时候太长的句子反而容易错。

追问

这是我照着卷子抄下来的，有的词是打错了 ，见笑了。辽宁高开提有改错，都应该改10处错误

追答

第一句：proud 后面加of
第二句：better后面应该还要加个one吧（我看了一下上面老师的答案，他是觉得应该加上job这个词，但是我没有十分看懂这个句子的意思，所以你可以选择用他的答案），如果是at错了的话就改成in。
第三句：away from work应该改成away for work吧，前者表示的是远离工作之类的，后者才是表示出门工作
先写到这里，我一会要去上课了，回来再给你答案。

Answer 2

建议调整以下句子：
1、and he had a big collection of rare bones which he was very pround.
pround改为proud，且后面应加上of
2、one year he managed to get a new and better at an university
句子不完整。应在better后面加job
3、his wife made the arrangements for her possessions to be taken in a moving van to their new home while he was away from work
此句表达混乱，建议修改
4、the following week three men started out take the things out of Mr Grey 's house and loading them into the van as one of them brought out a large wood box .
following改为next
5、he is just about to throw it into the van wuth all the other things when Mrs Grey ran out from her house
is改为was
6、please treat that box very gentle
gentle改为副词形式gently
7、the man was so surprised that he nearly deopped the box on his feet.
deopped改为dropped

追问

这应该有10个错误啊

追答

你自己计算一下，我的答案中有些是把几个错误放在一个题号下

追问

可是2 7题都是由于我疏忽打错字了。不好意思。而3 句子没错 就是跟卷子上的一样的 这是不可以调整句子的 只能改一个单词 或者填词 删词

追答

增加：1、the following week three men started out take the things out of
take前加to
2、loading them into the van
loading改为to load
3、as one of them brought out a large wood box
wood改为wooden

追问

额 敬爱的老师 短文改错的要求是一个词可以改成另一个词 而不能改成俩词，一个句子只能有一个错误。

追答

2、loading them into the van
loading改为to load 即在load前加to

追问

那不还是得把loading改为load嘛 还是改俩

追答

你怎么还不明白？在load 前加一个词 To ，加一个词是改俩？

追问

你不说 loading 改为 to load 那是改一个啊？ 真有意思 是有一个不明白的 再说 一篇短文改错只能加一个词 删一个词 算上你之前改的 这都加俩词了

追答

无语

Answer 3

Mr Grey was a biology professor ,and he had a big collection of rare bones which he was very pround of. one year he managed to get a new and better at an university .as Mr Grey was very busy ,his wife ma...

追问

这个短文是需要改10个的