Question

With the coming of Christmas holiday, I have a two week holiday. 求检查语法错误

With the coming of Christmas holiday, I have a two week holiday. I really expect to it. I decided to stay at home and memorize words. However I won't stay at home all the day. I will go to church and celebrate the Christmas day with people in church. It will have a lot of fun.

Answer 1

I have a two-week holiday.而且HOLIDAY与前文重复。或者可以写成vacation.如果你不是专业英语，要求很高的话，holiday与vacation可以通用

decided--decide还没到来所以现在时

stay at home and memorize words---我感觉应该改成I decide to stay at home to memorize words.

all the day-------all day

I will go to church----I will go to the church名词前面要有冠词。

celebrate the Christmas day---- Christmas 这个节日不能有DAY。

圣诞快乐Merry Christmas 而不是Merry Christmas Day
with people in church 重复 多此一举

It will have a lot of fun太平淡。可以转换句式为I think it will be fantastic

我感觉全文可以改成：
With the coming of Christmas, I have a two-week holiday. I really expect to it. I decide to stay at home to memorize words. But I won't stay at home all day. Because I will go to the church and celebrate the Christmas with the people. I think it will be fantastic.

望采纳。

Answer 2

a two week holiday改为a two-week holiday.
decided改为decide
all the day改为all day

Answer 3

two-week 或者two weeks
expect及物动词不用加to 要么expect to do,
I decided to 时态要统一致，用一般时
没有all the day换成all day。
语法就这样差不多，但是句子不连贯，不能得高分。

追问

I heart that Beijing was snowing. I really want to back to Beijing and I miss all the people in Beijing.这句话您在帮我看看

Answer 4

two week改为two-week decided改为decide最后一句It will have a lot of fun 改为I will have a lot fun 或者It will be very interesting.

Answer 5

two week改为two-week