Question

帮我改一下初二作文（急）！！！

I like to play basketball
Sports are the most popular activity all over the world. It’s including two kinds: one is mental sports, such as chess. And the other one is physical sports, such as soccer、basketball and American football.
Basketball is one of the most popular balls in the US, and now it’s very popular in China.
Playing basketball is very good for our health. When you play it, then you will know what I mean. If you play basketball, you will not catch a cold or get other illness easily. So we can study well and have a happy life.
Before I was nine, don’t like to play basketball. But one day, I was changed.
That was a cold day; everyone played basketball in the playground except me, because I hate the ball. PE teacher helped me catch the ball and shot at the basket. So I began to play basketball. I can’t forget him; he is the good person in my life.
I often play basketball in the playground at school. I usually play it will girls and sometimes with boys. They all play better than me, because most of them play in our school team. They are tall and strong, but I think I am the cleverest one in the competitions, because I always get a good store.
When I have free time, I go to play basketball and our teachers allow us to play games. So we are in good health.
Today, everyone needs health, health is very important in our life. So I hope everyone play sports, because play sports can keep fit and make us have a wonderful life.

麻烦快一点!!!

Answer 1

1.I was changed我被改变有点不通啊,应该是I CHANGED
2.I usually play it will girls 应该是WITH GIRLS(是你打错了吗)
3.except me, because ,They all play better than me, because BECAUSE前面不能加标点符号的
4.So I hope everyone play HOPE和PLAY是动词,一句句子是不能有两个动词的,所以应该把PLAY改成PLAYS!
5.because play sports 应该改成BECAUSE PLAYING SPORTS
(一共有4个BECAUSE前面加了逗号)

Answer 2

什么呀这是？