Question

英语高手请进，帮忙修改一篇英语作文中的语法错误

Formerly,I had a good friend,she name is coral.
She wears a short hair ang wears a black frame glasses.She looks very clever,and her eyes always shine with wisdom.She hasn't a lot of word.when she unfamiliar with you,but when she regards you as her friend,she will treat you as her family members.
I loved her very much when I first met her.After that,we became good friend quickly.
She was good at English but poor in chenistry and I was just right contrary with her.We often help with each other.she often has a interesting idea.she is simple and unaffected.I felt happy when I stay by her side.We both like cole flower very much,we agree that we would went to JiangXi to appreciate cole flower.
But one day I quarreled with she. She think I had too much friends and I always neglceted her.I felt angry ang wronged when I heard that,and I used a lot of hureful words.
After that,she unwilling to took notice of me.I was too late for regrets.
I truely want to tell her that I never neglect her.I did know she was important to me .I love she,I can't lose she.But I hardly have chance.
Now I learn how to take good care of frienglyness,but I have lost my love——coral

Answer 1

Formerly,I had a good friend,her name is coral.
She had a short hair and worn a black frame glasses.She looked very clever,and her eyes always shined with wisdom.She hadn't a lot of words,when she unfamiliar with you but when she regards you as her friend,she would treat you as her family members.
I loved her very much when I first met her.After that,we became good friend quickly.
She was good at English but poor in chenistry and I was just right contrary to her.We often helped with each other.she often had a interesting idea.she was simple and unaffected.I felt happy when I stayed by her side.We both liked cole flower very much,we agreed that we would went to JiangXi to appreciate cole flower.
But one day I quarreled with her. She thought I had too many friends and I always neglceted her.I felt angry when I heard that,and I used a lot of hureful words.
After that,she was unwilling to took notice of me.It was too late to regret.
I truely wanted to tell her that I never neglect her.I did know she was important to me .I love she,I can't lose she.But I hardly have chance.
Now I learn how to take good care of frienglyness,but I have lost my love——coral

Answer 2

Her name is Coral.
She hasn't a lot of words when she is unfamiliar with you.
she will treat you as one of her family members or
she will treat you as her family member.
After that,we became good friends quickly.
We often help each other.
she often has an interesting idea.
and I used a lot of hurtful words.
I really want to tell her that I had never neglected her.
I do know she is important to me .
I love her,I can't lose her.But I hardly have chances.
Now I learn how to take good care of friendship,but I have lost my love——Coral
另外文中的两处ang 应为and

Answer 3

我实在不知道你要用过去时还是现在时……
Formerly,I had a good friend,her name is coral.
She wears short hair and wears black frame glasses.She looks very clever,and her eyes always shine with wisdom.She doesn't have a lot of words if she is unfamiliar with you,but when she regards you as her friend,she will treat you as her family member.
I loved her very much the first sight I met her. Therefor,we became good friend quickly.
She was good at English but poor in chemistry and I was just right contrary to her.We often helped each other.she often had some interesting ideas.she is simple and unaffected.I felt happy when I stayed with her.We both like cole flowers very much,we decided that we will go to Jiangxi to view cole flower.
But one day I quarreled with her. She thought I had too many friends and I always ignored her.I felt angry when I heard that,and I said lots of hurting words.
Then,she never takes notice of me any more.It was too late to regrets.
I truely want to tell her that I never neglected her.I did know she was important to me .I love her,I can't lose her.But I hardly have chance.
Now I learn how to take good care of friendship,but I have lost my love——coral