Question

请英语专业高手翻译

翻译要求：不能采用软件及在线翻译，人工翻译，本人虽英语不好，但是也能看得出翻译质量。

翻译内容：当时我也想和你一起共进晚餐，但是我只是一名负责机械加工工艺的工程师，没有领导职务，领导没有安排让我去
，所以很遗憾。如果你能再来北京的话，我更愿意以个人，以朋友的身份招待你，带你去购物，带你去景点，那样的
话会更好。2013年马上来了，希望我们都好好努力，事业上能蒸蒸日上，家庭美满幸福。
最好翻译的口语化一些，不要提严肃正式，但是语法措辞还是要比较注意，不要主要低级错误。想用在线翻译的可以绕行，翻译质量好的，可以再追加财富值

Answer 1

当时我也想和你一起共进晚餐，但是我只是一名负责机械加工工艺的工程师，没有领导职务，领导没有安排让我去，所以很遗憾。如果你能再来北京的话，我更愿意以个人，以朋友的身份招待你，带你去购物，带你去景点，那样的话会更好。2013年马上来了，希望我们都好好努力，事业上能蒸蒸日上，家庭美满幸福。

I was also thinking of having dinner with you at that time, but I was just an engineer of machine-finishing technique, having no managerial titles. My boss didn't assign me to go there, so it was a pity. If you could come to Beijing sometime, I'd like to invite you personally as a friend, taking you to shopping and sight-seeing, which would be much better. The year of 2013 is upcoming, and I wish we could all work hard and prosper in our career, as well as enjoy happy time with our families.

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追问

prosper in our career ，这样翻译是不是不大好呢，career是职业的意思，并不是指工作，请再完善下整体翻译内容

追答

career 是没问题的，书面口语都常用，的确是指“事业、职业生涯”，这里可写成careers。换成 work 或 business 也是可以的。

追问

和外国人开头怎么称谓，英语课本上基本上都说dear ***,还有没有其他的呢，比较随意些的，不要太拘束正式的

追答

老外常写的就是 Hello, Hi，很随意的。Dear 通常用作书信，比较书面化。电子邮件如果对方是熟人，一句 "Hello, XXX" 就可以了。不熟悉的人可以用 "Dear Sir/Madam"，比较正式、严肃。除此之外，也有写 "Greetings, XXX!" 的，语气显得亲切友好。

Answer 2

当时我也想和你一起共进晚餐，但是我只是一名负责机械加工工艺的工程师，没有领导职务，领导没有安排让我去，所以很遗憾。如果你能再来北京的话，我更愿意以个人，以朋友的身份招待你，带你去购物，带你去景点，那样的话会更好。
2013年马上来了，希望我们都好好努力，事业上能蒸蒸日上，家庭美满幸福。

I did like to have dinner with you that time, but I am only an engineer responsible for the mechanical process. not a leadership position and our leader did not arrange me to attend. Therefore very regret for that, however, if you come to Beijing again next time, I shall welcome you as an individual or a friend, taking you shopping and sightseeing. That way, it would be even better!
2013 will soon be here, hope we will work harder and our career shall progress day by day. Most importantly, wish us to have a very happy family!

很乐意能够帮到你，希望会对你有助。
若不明白请继续问，如满意敬请采纳，O(∩_∩)O谢谢你。

Answer 3

当时我也想和你一起共进晚餐，但是我只是一名负责机械加工工艺的工程师，没有领导职务，领导没有安排让我去，所以很遗憾。如果你能再来北京的话，我更愿意以个人，以朋友的身份招待你，带你去购物，带你去景点，那样的话会更好。2013年马上来了，希望我们都好好努力，事业上能蒸蒸日上，家庭美满幸福。
I want to have dinner with you, but I am just a mechanical process engineer, no leadership, leadership has not arranged for me to go, so sorry. If you ever come to Beijing, I am more willing to individuals, with friends to entertain you, take you shopping, take you to the scenic spots, it will be better. 2013 is coming, hope all of us try, career can be on the upgrade, happy family.

追问

你这google翻译的好不好，悬赏100分不是让人糊弄的

Answer 4

I was thinking of having dinner with you that evening, but regretfully my managers didn't include me then. When you come to Beijing next time, do let me know and I would like to treat you as a friend to some places of interest and we can go shopping together as well. The new year is coming, I hope that both of us could achieve great success at work and enjoy happiness with our families.

追问

谢谢你的翻译，但是我觉得第一句翻译的不是很好，而且“但是我只是一名负责机械加工工艺的工程师”这句话也没有体现出来，请再完善下，好吗

追答

因为外国人没有很强的等级观念,所以他不会明白为什么作为工程师不能被邀请参加晚宴.
我建议如上翻译,当然,如果你一定要表达这个意思也是可以的

当时我也想和你一起共进晚餐，但是我只是一名负责机械加工工艺的工程师，没有领导职务，领导没有安排让我去
，所以很遗憾。
I was thinking of having dinner with you that evening, but being a mechanic engineer without any management responsibilities didn't get me the pass from my manager. What a pity!

Answer 5

At that time I also want to have dinner with you, but I'm just a responsible for machining process engineer, no leadership positions, leadership did not arrange for me to go, so we regret. If you will come back to Beijing words, I prefer to individual, the identity of the friend to you,and take you to shopping, take you to attractions, in that case will be better. 2013 is coming I hope we all work hard, career can progresses day by day, the family is perfect happiness.

Answer 6

At that time I also want to have dinner with you, but I'm just a responsible for machining process engineer, no leadership positions, leadership did not arrange for me to go, so we regret. If you will come back to Beijing words, I prefer to individual, the identity of the friend to you,and take you to shopping, take you to attractions, in that case will be better. 2013 is coming I hope we all work hard, career can progresses day by day, the family is perfect happiness 望采纳