Question

短文改错 10处 I went to Christmas shopping with my mom yesterday

I went to Christmas shopping with my mom yesterday.When we finished shopping,my mother asked me I wanted anything else.I nod immediately as I remembered my good friends Wang Lin,whose mother died last year.He didn't have a coat.But I decided to buy one for he.I toldmy mom which I thought.She was very delighted and given me 200 yuan.With the money,I bought a black coat for Wang Lin.This moring,I wrapped the coat on Christmas paper and wrote"To Wang Lin,From Santa Claus" on it.I'm very happy that I could do anything for him.

Answer 1

I went to (1.去掉to) Christmas shopping with my mom yesterday. When we finished shopping, my mother asked me (2.此处加上if或whether) I wanted anything else. I nod (用一般过去时态nodded) immediately as I remembered my good friends (3.friend用单数) Wang Lin, whose mother died last year. He didn't have a coat. But (4.意思不是转折，而是顺承，But 改为 So) I decided to buy one for he (5.用宾格him). I told my mom which (6.改为 what) I thought. She was very delighted and given (7.一般过去时，用gave) me 200 yuan. With the money, I bought a black coat for Wang Lin. This morning, I wrapped the coat on (8.改为in, 包在纸张里面) Christmas paper and wrote "To Wang Lin, From Santa Claus" on it. I'm very happy that I could do anything (9.改为something, 肯定句) for him.我只能找到9处错误。也许第10处把最后一句中的 could 改为 can，意思是“现在能够”。也许是把最后一个词 him 改为 others，意思是“我很高兴能为他人作点事情。”

Answer 2

I went shopping with my mom yesterday which was the Christmas day. When we finished shopping, my mother asked me if I want to buy anything else. I nodded immediately because I remembered Wang Lin who is my good friend, his mother died last year. He didn't even have a coat so that I decided to buy one for him. I told my mom what I thought about just now. She was very delighted and gave me 200 yuan. I took the money and bought a black coat for Wang Lin. On this morning, after i warpping the coat on a packing paper, I worte 'To Wang Lin. From Santa Claus' on it. I am very happy that I can actually do something to help him.

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