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英语口语演讲比赛 我的梦想 带翻译是服装设计师的

在我心目中，每个人都应当有自己的梦想。我认为有一个梦想就是我们有一个想法，然后我们将尽一切事情以达到目标。只要我们有一个目标得以实现，我们不会盲目至少。
我希望当上一名服装设计师，可以自己设计美丽的衣服。因为我觉得穿上自己设计的衣服那该是多么的自豪啊！在电视上看到一些时装展，仔细欣赏，时尚，个性的衣服像磁铁吸引我。后来，我学会画简单的衣服，渐渐的我学会了画多层次的衣服，各式各样的服装，我会挑战它们，总觉得画后，会有一种成就感。如果我是一个时装设计师，我会让世界上的人都穿上我设计的衣服，让人感受到我内心的愉悦和幸福…现在我已经是上初中一年级学生，虽然目前我做的是学习，但是每一个梦想的前提都是要好好学习，当然我还是会尽我最大努力，来做这项工作的赢家。现在我所做的一切是接近我的梦想。我觉得生活是充满希望，是丰富多彩的，我有足够的信心去实现我的梦想。
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Answer 1

如果你的演讲稿是别人写出来的，那你参加英文演讲的意义在哪里？学会了背诵吗？不如自己找资料，自己写吧，在准备资料的过程中，你会学到更多。 也许会失败，但又怎样呢？中国缺少的就是有独立创新精神的人啊。想想爱迪生的灯泡实验吧。

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只是我自己写的、、、好吗、、、你这文不对题啊，你看看我这是干嘛的、真有劲哎

Answer 2

建议您去百度翻译。分数太少了

Answer 3

In my mind, everyone should have their own dream. Ithink that having a dream means that we have an idea,and then we will do all the things to achieve the target. As long as we have a goal to be realized, we won't be blind at least.
I hope to be a fashion designer, can design beautifulclothes yourself. Because I think wear their designclothes that is how proud of you! See some fashion show, careful appreciation on TV personality, fashion,dress like a magnet attracted me. Later, I learned to draw simple clothes, slowly I learned to draw multiple layers of clothes, every kind of clothes, I will challengethem, always felt that painting, there will be a sense of achievement. If I were a fashion designer, I will let all the people of the world to wear my clothes, let a person feel my inner joy and happiness... Now I am in junior high school the first grade students, although I do now is to learn, but every dream is to Study hard, of course, I willdo my best, to do the work of the winner. Now everything I do is close to my dream. I think life is filled with hope, isrich and colorful, I have enough confidence to realize my dream.