Question

急求笔试英文自我介绍（工作经历、工作心得、个人特长、优势、胜任的理由）

不要太长，四五行就行了。

我自己打算这样写：
我工作已经有4年了，在这四年里我学到了很多：像怎样与人相处融洽，怎样最有效地沟通交流，怎样把自己工作做好；同时也锻炼出不怕累不放弃的精神。
从性格来说，我开朗积极，有责任心，适应性很强，也有很强的团队合作意识。我的优点是细心，有条理，做事有计划，对于工作自己要求比较高，力求做到做好。
我一直坚信一分耕耘一分收获，只有付出努力才能得到回报。
对于我所应聘的职位，虽然没有工作经验，但是我想这并不是最重要的，态度是决定一切的关键。我会努力我也相信我能做好。
请给我一个机会。谢谢。

求翻译，顺便可以进行更好的改动或更好的语句。
最好灵活自然点，不要太中式英语了。
万分感谢。

Answer 1

I have been working for 4 yeas.
During the Four-year hard working,I tried my best to learn all kinds of konwledge and ideas.
I tend to persist until I succeed.To be a emplyee,i have konwn and gotten what is the basic professional quality to do my job as usual.Such as communication.
I am an outgoing, self-motivated and steadyfast team player with good communication skills.
I believe I can adapt to the new working environment and get well along with others.
I am always strict with myself, observing the discipline and finishing tasks carefully.
Always remember that no pains no gains.
Although I might be a new hand for this position,i am full of strong sense of responsibility.The working attitude is most important.
I am holding confidence to do best.
Please allow me a chance to this job.Thanks a lot.