Question

这句英语有语法错误吗？

他们愿意以每磅10美元的价钱买下由听众烘制的最大的饼干。这次竞赛在听众中引起极其热烈的反响。不久，形状各异，大小不一的饼干陆续送到工厂
They would buy the biggest biscuit which was baked by listeners for ten dollors per pound. This competition caused strong effect during the listeners. Soon after, various shape of the biscuits were sent to the manufacturer one after another.
1、这句英语有语法错误吗？若有请指出
2、地道程度如何呢？
谢谢

Answer 1

非常不地道 错误很多 而且重复累赘 该省略的没略去
They would pay ten dollors per pound for the biggest biscuit baked by the listeners . The listeners strongly focused on this competition. Soon after, biscuits with different shape and size were sent to the manufactory one after another.

Answer 2

they were willing to buy the biggest biscuit baked by audiences for ten dollors per pound
this compition was warmly welcomed among the audiences. soon varied shapes and sizes of biscuits were sent to food factorise successively.
1 听众一般不用listener， cause effect一般说的是坏的影响， during一般表示时间，
2， 地道方面有待提高，

Answer 3

<<They [would 错=were willing to] buy the biggest biscuit <which was删> baked by listeners for ten [dollors per= dollars a] pound. This competition [caused=received] [strong effect during=great response among] the listeners. Soon after, various shape+s [ and sizes] of [the=删] biscuits were sent to the manufacturer by one (listener) after another.>>

Answer 4

during 改为among。
最后一句有点问题，改成 biscuits with different shape and size were send……

Answer 5

第一个饼干加s
shape加s，of the biscuits
manufacturer改成manufactory
翻译得可以