Question

初二英语作文,要求如下,在线等,急急急急急！！

假如你叫Milly,你在报纸上看到一则关于火灾,你想告诉John,请你根据下面表格中的内容给他写信,表格中的要点须全部出现,表达顺序可自己安排,语法正确,上下文连贯,要求适当发挥,100词左右.

Answer 1

Dear John,
I'm writing to tell you a terrible accident from the newspaper. A big fire broke out in a girl’s dormitory of one Shanghai university at No. 2271 on Zhongshan Road. It happened at 6 a.m. on Nov. 14th, 2008. A witness said that at about 6 a.m. he heard some girls calling for help. After that he saw the girl’s dormitory burning and four girls jumping off. The fire lasted severl hours before the firefighters came. As a result of the fire, four girls lost their lives. When I heard about this bad news, I felt very sad. I hope that such accidents won’t happen again. What do you think about this accident?
I’m looking forward to receiving your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Milly

Answer 2

伤亡人数｜出4名女生死亡，无人伤亡。（我的理解是除了4个女生死了，没有人受伤或者死亡了。因为伤亡表示受伤或者死亡。前面说4个死了。后面又说无人死。 仅仅代表个人意见）
希望能帮助到你
Dear John,
I read the news that in Shanghai, 2271 West Zhongshan road a Shanghai female college student in November 14, 2008 6 a.m. this morning 6 am, heard a girl calling for help, and then see the girls' dormitory fire, which has 4 female students from the 6 floor, the specific situation is unknown, the fire lasted several hours, fire then came to the rescue, in addition to 4 girls died, no casualties
Your's Milly

Answer 3

说好的表格呢。

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传好了,跪求作文~

追答

Dear John,
I saw an disaster of fire in today's newspaper.It was very horrible so I write to you to give you some tips of how to escape from fire.

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神马,看到表格了米？

追答

Dear John,
I saw an disaster of fire in today's newspaper.It was very horrible .
It happened in a girls' department at 6 a.m. of 14th November,2008 .The building belongs to a college of shanghai in Zhongshan West road.As the witness said , she heard someone called for help.And then she saw the girls' department was on fire, four girls jumped from six floor.
The fire lasted for severl hours till the fireman came. It says there was no hurt or death except the four girls.
Fire is dangerous ,we must keep it away.so I write to you to give you some reminding
Yours
MIlly