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英语翻译帮忙找错，挑毛病，并说理由。谢谢！！（急啊！）

2003年GDP比上年增长13.1%；全社会固定资产投资增长42.1%；外贸出口总额增长37.3%；实际吸收外商直接投资增长60%；地方财政一般预算收入增长30.7 %。有在建或已签约项目投资总额380多亿元。高效廉洁政府建设初见成效，社会文化各项事业取的重大进展。
In 2003, the GDP of Yunfu increased by 13.1% over the previous year, the total fixed asset investment of the whole society by 42.1%, total value of foreign export by 37.3%, foreign investment in actual use by 60%, and local financial revenue of general budget by 30.7%. Contracted investment projects and those under construction have reached a value of over 38 billion RMB Yuan. High efficient and upright government system has come into being. Great progress has been achieved in social and cultural undertakings.
大家看看这段英语翻译的语言，用词，表达，语法等是否有问题，是否准确地道。如果大家有更好的表达，希望可以说说，O(∩_∩)O谢谢！

Answer 1

In 2003 GDP up by 13.1% over the previous year; The whole society fixed asset investment growth 42.1%; Foreign trade exports increased by 37.3%; The actual foreign direct investment growth 60%; Local financial general budget revenue growth of 30.7%. There are under construction or has signed a project with a total investment of more than 380 one hundred million yuan. Efficient initial achievements in the building of a clean and honest government, social and cultural undertakings of the significant progress.
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Answer 2

In 2003, Yunfu’s GDP increased by 13.1% over the previous year, total investment in fixed asset by 42.1%, gross foreign export value by 37.3%, actual absorbed FDI (foreign direct investment) [in actual use实际利用] by 60%, and general budget revenue for local public finance by 30.7%. The total investment in on-going and contracted projects exceeds RMBY38 billion. Initial success has been achieved in construction of an efficient and clean-handed government, and remarkable progress made in various social and cultural undertakings.
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Answer 3

High efficient 应该是highly efficient吧