Question

帮我找一下这篇英语作文的错误

Pollution is one of the most important problems on the world.We must do our best to protect our enviroment.However,we should do something from our lives.For example,we should pick the rubbish up when we see it on the ground.We shouldn't make any noise in the public places.In a word,we should make our city more beautiful and let us have a good place to live.

Answer 1

Pollution is one of the most important problems (in) the world.We must do our best to protect our enviroment.()we should do something (in) our lives.For example,we should pick the rubbish up when we see it on the ground.We shouldn't make any noise in () public places.In (conclusion),we should make our city more beautiful and let us have a good place to live.

Answer 2

1.in the world
2.however可以改成enviroment,and
3.in the public places改成in public更简洁一点
4.have a good place to live