Question

短文改错,急!请写出为什么错 .谢谢!十个错误.

Yesterday, I go shopping in the supermarket.As I was looking at the goods I noticed an old man who was seemed to be following me where I went.As I moved, there he was, smiled at me. I wondered if I had done something wrong. But I didn't think I had.So,I believed if there must be something wrong with him. I became a bit scaring. At the food section I was selecting the chicken when I felt a tap on the shoulders. Turning around,I saw that it was same man."Lady," he finally said, "you have your shopping basket."At that moment Irealized I miaunderstood him, so I said sorry for him at once.

Answer 1

Yesterday, I 【1.go昨天发生的事情，用过去时went】 shopping in 【2.the不用特指，a更合适】 supermarket. As I was looking at the goods I noticed an old man who 【3.was删除】 seemed to be following me where【4.wherever无论哪里】 I went. As I moved, there he was, smiled【5.用smiling，作补语】 at me. I wondered if I had done something wrong. But I didn't think I had. So, I believed 【6.if用that引导宾语从句】 there must be something wrong with him. I became a bit 【7.scaring害怕用scared】. At the food section I was selecting the chicken when I felt a tap on the 【8.shoulders用单数shoulder与a对应】. Turning around, I saw that it was 【9.same特指加the】 man. "Lady," he finally said, "you have your shopping basket."At that moment I realized 【10.加that引导从句】I 【11.misunderstood用完成时had misunderstood表示比你realized时已经发生】 him, so I said sorry 【12.for用to表示对他说】 him at once.
注：2可忽略，10有时可省略

Answer 2

Yesterday, I go(改为went)shopping in the supermarket.As I was looking at the goods I noticed an old man who was (去掉was)seemed to be following me where(改为wherever) I went.As I moved, there he was, smiled(改为smiling) at me. I wondered if I had done something wrong. But I didn't think I had.So,I believed if(改为that) there must be something wrong with him. I became a bit scaring(改为scared). At the food section I was selecting the(去掉the) chicken when I felt a tap on the shoulders(改为shoulder). Turning around,I saw that it was(加上the) same man."Lady," he finally said, "you have your shopping basket."At that moment Irealized I miaunderstood him, so I said sorry for(改为to) him at once.

追问

能不能给我解释一下为什么这么改.
明天我们老师要让我讲.可是我是个英语白痴...

追答

1go--went句子的时间是yesterday
2.was去掉是因为seem没被动式。
3。where--wherever无论走到哪里
4.smiled(改为smiling) 现在分词作伴随状语，因为前面无并列连词不用过去式
5.if(改为that) believed后只接that从句
6.scaring(改为scared). 因为改完的词意是感到害怕的
7.(去掉the)chicken不可数
8.shoulders(改为shoulder).只是拍了一个肩膀
9.加上the)因为same前一定要加定冠词
10say sorry to sb是固定结构

追问

能不能把4.5通俗一点给我讲一遍.谢谢.....

Answer 3

1.Yesterday, I go to shop in the supermarket.
2 .old man who seemed
3.to follow me where I went.
4.As I moved, he was there,
5.smiled to me.
6. But I think I didn't.
7.So,I believed there must be something wrong with him.
8.I became scared.
9.When I turned around,I saw that i same man.
10"Lady," he finally said, "you have left your shopping basket."At that moment I realized I misunderstood him, so I said sorry for him at once.

Answer 4

这是英文吧，我看不懂