Question

有关英语的看图说话，下面是我做的，但存在一些错误，希望有人帮我找出来！！

One day Tom are waiting for a bus. When he was in the bus, an old man got on the bus. He walked with a cane.Then he stood up and let the seat to the old man.The old man sat down, Tom stood beside him.Finally, Tom out of the car and waved to the old man to say goodbye.

Question : What does Tom did when the old man got on the bus later?
Answer : He stood up and let the seat to the old man.

Answer 1

one day Tom was waiting for a bus.When he was in the bus , an old man got on the bus with a walkingtick.So he stood up and offered his seat to the old man.The old man took the seat and had a happy talk with Tom.Finally,Tom got off the bus and said goodbye to the old man.
Q:What does Tom did after the old man got on the bus?
A:He stood up and offered his seat to him.
这是我根据你写的修改的 你有点时态跟单复数形式的错误 自己看一下吧 努力啦~

Answer 2

one day Tom was waiting for a bus. when he was in the bus, an old man got on the bus, with a cane. Then he stood up and let the old man take his seat. After the old man sat down, Tom stood beside him.
Finally, tom got off the bus and waved to the old man, saying "goodbye".
Question: What does Tom do when the old man got on the bus later?
我只是把你给的改了下，我觉得这篇小短文还可以写的更好哈，加油

Answer 3

• 以下是在原文基础上所做的最少也是必要的改动One day Tom was waiting for the bus.  ...

　　Then he stood up and offered hisseat to the old man.The old man sat down while Tom stood beside him.Finally, Tom got off  the bus and waved to the old man saying goodbye.

 

　　Answer : He stood up and offered hisseat to the old man.

Answer 4

错误太多，所以我又写了一遍。
One day, Tom was waiting for the bus to go to school. On the half way, an old man got on the bus, after seeing it, Tom stood up and invited the old man to have his seat. Then, Tom stood byside when the old sat down. Finally, the bus stopped at the gate of school, Tom got off it, and said goodbye to the old man.

Answer 5

你做的很好啊，我觉得没啥错误

Answer 6

very good