Question

英语改错！！跪求！说明错的理由！！

1
Since that journey, I never sailed again.
2
I'd rather prefer just to lie on the beach.
3
She began to think she was becoming mad.
4
Both the husband and the wife aren't reliable.
5
The headphones on my new walkman is great.
6
The teacher told us to see what he was doing.
7
Her beautiful blond hairs were shining in the sun.
8
They will steal all your money and valuable things.
9
I expect that you will be able to come to the party.
10
Businessmen invest vast amounts on these industries.
11
I'm doing the course to expand my job opportunities.
12
I didn't have a room for my own but had to share one.
13
I don't agree the people who say women should stay at home.
14
I was far too upset and emotional to make a reasonable decision.
15
Stricter punishments may help to prevent society from serious crime
16
I was thinking if you would like to have lunch before visiting the
museum.

17
If you haven't sent it yet, I'd be pleased if you would do that as soon as possible.
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Answer 1

1. Since that journey, I  have never sailed again.  since 表示自从时，主句用现在完成时态

2. I'd rather  just to lie on the beach. would  rather  do sth   固定搭配

3. She began to think she was going mad.  发疯的短语是 go mad 

4. The headphones on  my new walkman are great  , 主谓不一致

5. The teacher told us to observe  what he was doing,  see 是短暂性动词，老师叫我们观察他在干什么。

6. Both the husband and the wife are reliable.   both 后用否定词表示部分否定，但句意是丈夫妻子都可靠。

7. Her beautiful blond hair was  shining in the sun . hair 当头发不可数

8. They will steal all your money and other valuable things.  钱和其他贵重物品

9. I expect that you will come to the party.  be able to 表示能够的结果，与expect 矛盾

10. Businessmen invest vast amounts in these industries. invest sth in sth  在。。。方面投资

11. I'm taking the course to expand my job opportunities.  take the course  上课

12. I didn't have a room of my own but had to share one.  sth of one's own  某人自己的东西

13. I don't agree with  the people who say women should stay at home.  agree with sb  同意某人的看法

14.  I was far too emotional upset  to make a reasonable decision. emotional upset  情绪失常Stricter punishments may help to protect society from serious crime.   protect ...from  保护。。。免遭。。。

15. I was wondering if you would like to have lunch before visiting the museum。 
     wonder if  想知道是否 

16. If you haven't sent it yet, I'd be pleased if you  do that as soon as possible. if条件句用现在时 表将来

Answer 2

1.Since that journey, I have never sailed again.
2.I'd rather just lie on the beach.(would rather do 及 prefer to do均表示更喜欢做某事)
3.She began to think she was getting mad.
4.Neither the husband nor the wife is reliable.
5. The headphones on my new walkman are great.
6 The teacher told us to look at what he was doing.
7 Her beautiful blond hair is shining in the sun.
8 They will steal all your money and other valuable things.
9 I expect that you are able to come to the party.
10 Businessmen invest vast amounts in these industries.
11 I'm doing the course to increase my job opportunities.
12 I didn't have a room for myself but had to share one.
13 I don't agree with the people who say women should stay at home.
14 I was too upset and emotional to make a reasonable decision.
15 Stricter punishments may help prevent society from serious crime
16 I was thinking whether you would like to have lunch before visiting the museum.
17 If you haven't sent it yet, I'd be pleased if you do that as soon as possible.
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