Question

英语短文改错，帮帮忙

Answer 1

1. 去掉第一句中的but. 2. 第一句中的children改为child 3. 第三句中的about改为for blame sb for doing sth. 4. 第三句中的did改为does 5. 第四句中的to me 改为for me 6 第五句中 Doing as..中的Doing改为Do 7. 在第六句中的points后加out 8. 第六句中的hurting 改为hurt 9. 第七句中的tried改为trying 10. 第七句中的talk with he中的he改为him。

Answer 2

altough与but不能连用，二者取其一，children是复数，应改成child,punish for才是因为什么惩罚谁，leave sth后接动词原形，全篇用的是一般现在时，所以did改成does,后面的是allthe time,example后接for,doing改成do,hurting改成hurt，he改成him，介词后跟宾格

Answer 3

Although I'm 16 years old, but (but去掉)my father still treats me as a careless children(改为child). He doesn't value my opinions. He is very strict with me and often punishes me about(改为for) leaving things lying around in the house while he did (改为does)this all (加上the)time . I think he fails to set an example to me to follow . But he often says:"Doing (改为Do)as I say, not as I do." Even worse, he points (加上out)my past mistakes to guests, making me feel hurting(改为hurt). I love my father,but I can't bear what he does. I have been (去掉been)tried may times to talk with he(改为him) but he never listens. Please, help me .