Question

帮我看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误或是可以改进的地方？

I love my motherland There is a beautiful country standing in the east of the world.It has red soil,big mountains,long rivers and hard-working people.It’s just like a diamond,shinning all the time,and it is my dearest country­­------China! I love my motherland!Because I love the different races of my country.Each race has its own culture and customs.Some people are kind,some people are generous,some people are humorous.Anyway,I can’t display every race of my country,but what I want to tell you is that the Chinese people are great.Because of them,our motherland is developing day by day.Our country is becoming much stronger tham before. My country has so many great places of interest,which is known not only to every citizen,but also to the world.When the foreigners talk about China,they all extend their thumbs and say”En...China is a famous and fantastic country!” Yes,that’s sure!We have the Great Wall,the world’s second longest river,the oldest history and the most beautiful culture.As we all know,China is one of the largest countries in the world.How great it is!So now I can speak to the world loudly”My country is really great! My country is really beautiful!I love my motherland!

Answer 1

这是一篇很敬磨好的文章，侍搭没有什么语法错误。但我觉得有点乱。 race是指种族，nationallity , nation 才是亮谈斗民族