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Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday morning.I'like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grangparents.They were very old and unluckily they are not in a good health recently.My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised visit them with me this Saturday.My mother said we will stay at my grandparents' the whole weekend . So I'm real sorry I can't attend your party. I hope you will understand all this. Here I wish you a lot fun on your birthday.

Answer 1

Thank you very much for invite (改为inviting)me to your birthday party in(改为on) Saturday morning.I'like to come and(改为but) I have to go to my hometown to see my grangparents.They were (改为are)very old and unluckily they are not in a (去掉a)good health recently.My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised (加上to)visit them with me this Saturday.My mother said we will (改为would)stay at my grandparents' the whole weekend . So I'm real (改为really)sorry I can't attend your party. I hope you will understand all this. Here I wish you a lot (加上of)fun on your birthday and many happy return(改为returns) of the day.保证答案完全正确。后半句是我为你加上去的。你没打出来。

Answer 2

Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party on Saturday morning.I'd like to come but I have to go to my hometown to see my grangparents.They are very old and unluckily they are not in good health recently.My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised to visit them with me this Saturday.My mother said we will stay at my grandparents' home the whole weekend . So I'm really sorry I can't attend your party. I hope you will understand this. Here I wish you have a lot of fun on your birthday. 我只是尽力改了一些，不一定能把全部错误都改出来，在看看其他人有没有更好的答案吧。

Answer 3

1.invite改为inviting;
2.in改为on；
3.and改but；
4.see改visit；
5.were改are；
6.去掉and后面的are；
7.promised后加to；
8.will改would；
9.grandparents改grandparents’；
10. real改really；
a lot后加of全文是这样的：thank you very much for invite（inviting） me to your birthday party in Saturday evening. I’d like to come and （but）I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents. They were very old and are （去掉and）unluckily they are not in good health recontly . My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised（to） visit them with me this Saturday, my mother said we Will （would）stay at my grandparents the whole weekend, so i am Real sorry i can not attend your party, i hope you Will understand all this, here i wish you a lot （of）fun

Answer 4

1.Thank you very much for invite【inviting】 me to your birthday party in【on】 Saturday morning.
2.I'like to come and【but】 I have to go to my hometown to see my grangparents.
3.They were【are】 very old and unluckily they are not in a good health recently.
4.My mother has already made a telephone call to them and promised【promised to 】visit them with me this Saturday.
5.My mother said【says】 we will stay at my grandparents' 【at】the whole weekend . .
6.So I'm real 【really】sorry I can't attend your party.
7.I hope you will 【can】understand all this. Here I wish you a lot 【of】fun on your birthday.

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Answer 5

1.invite改为inviting;
2.in改为on；
3.and改but；
4.see改visit；
5.were改are；
6.去掉and后面的are；
7.promised后加to；
8.will改would；
9.grandparents改grandparents’；
10. real改really；