Question

英语翻译，求英语达人帮我翻译一段话：

劳驾各位，帮我翻译一段面试用的自我介绍，不要在线自动翻译，要求简单流畅，语法准确，重点地方富有感情，谢谢各位了！
我的家乡是山东省日照市，一个美丽的海滨城市。我在这里生活了接近20年，我非常热爱我的家乡，但我也对远方充满了期待。
从小我就对蓝天充满了好奇心，我总是幻想着驾驶一架飞机飞上天空，远离地表，接近云彩，俯瞰山和水(大好河山)。
今天我有一个机会让这个梦想成为今后的(为之奋斗的)事业，那就是成为深圳航空的一名飞行员，我知道这并不是一件容易的事情，现在的我距离一名真正的飞行员很有很长的一段距离，但是我愿意为这个目标付出一切。
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最后了，我自己写的，哪位帮忙纠正下，追加悬赏，谢谢了。。。
goodmorning, i'm glad to be here for this interview, now let me in troduce myself, my name is MaJi, 22 years old now, i graduated from...in july.2014.

my family includ my father and mother,i'm an only child, we love each other very much, my father have a stone factory, and my mother stay inside all the time, she is a housewife, i have a very happy family.
下面的怎么翻译：
我享受这份工作，而不用再为我要做什么工作而苦恼（what should i working for）而苦恼； 我对即将到来的工作充满了热情。

Answer 1

My hometown is a city called Rizhao in Shandong province.It's a beautiful city located at the east coast of China.I lived there for 20 years.I love it and am also curious about the world out of it at the same time.
I am full of imaginatioin about the sky since I was very young,I imagin that someday I could fly in the sky by driving a plane,far from the surface and close to the clouds,overlooking the moutains and lakes.
Today, I have a chance here that can make my dreams come true.To become a pilot of Shenzhen Airlines.I know it would be a long way for me till i became a experienced driver,but I determine to devote all myself to this objective.
你觉得哪句不合适，我调整一下。
你第二段用法问题有点多，我没给你列出来，给你写了一段，你最好查查字典，理解一下，因为你原来那个说法，说出去漏洞百出，别嫌我说得不好听，你不是要过面试吗，最好听取别人的建议。
Goodmorning, i'm glad to be here for this interview, now let me in troduce myself, my name is MaJi, 22 years old now, i graduated from...in july.2014.

There are there members in my family. My father ,my mother and I。i'm the only son, we all love our family。 my father have a stone factory,（不知道你这个Stone factory是不是采矿工厂的意思，但是正常应该说：mining factory） and my mother is a housewife, she has to stay at home and deal with the housework everyday(我知道你想表达你妈妈是家庭主妇，总呆在家里，但是stay inside的意思是‘在。。。里面’的意思，没有‘在家里’的意思。stay at home才是).i have a very happy family.
下面的怎么翻译：
我享受这份工作，而不用再为我要做什么工作而苦恼（what should i working for）而苦恼； 我对即将到来的工作充满了热情。
I will enjoy this job，without worrying about what i should work for。I am full of pasion to embrace it。

Answer 2

我的家乡是山东省日照市，一个美丽的海滨城市。我在这里生活了接近20年，我非常热爱我的家乡，但我也对远方充满了期待。
从小我就对蓝天充满了好奇心，我总是幻想着驾驶一架飞机飞上天空，远离地表，接近云彩，俯瞰山和水(大好河山)。
今天我有一个机会让这个梦想成为今后的(为之奋斗的)事业，那就是成为深圳航空的一名飞行员，我知道这并不是一件容易的事情，现在的我距离一名真正的飞行员很有很长的一段距离，但是我愿意为这个目标付出一切。

My hometown is Rizhao City, Shandong Province, a beautiful coastal city. I have lived here for
nearly 20 years and I love my hometown very much. However, I am also filled with anticipations
toward distant locations outside of my hometown.

Ever since I was young, I was filled with curiosity towards the blue skies, always fantasized about piloting a plane into the sky, geting far away from the earth's surface, approaching the clouds, overlooking the beautiful mountains and rivers.

Today, I have a chance to make this dream to turn into a future career that I am eagerly striving for, and that is to become a pilot of Shenzhen Airlines.

I know that this is not something that is easy. There is a great distance from where I am now to the place where a real pilot is, but I am willing to give it all to achieve this goal.

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Good morning, I'm very glad to be here for this interview. Now, let me introduce myself. My name is Ma Ji, 22 years old now, and I graduated from XX in July of 2014.

My family members include my father and mother. I'm the only child, and we all love each other very much. My father has a stone factory, and my mother stays at home because she is a housewife. I have a very happy family.

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下面的怎么翻译：
我享受这份工作，而不用再为我要做什么工作而苦恼（what should i working for）而苦恼； 我对即将到来的工作充满了热情。

I enjoy this work, and do not need to be worried about the work I want to do anymore. I am filled with enthusiasm towards the upcoming work.

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Answer 3

My hometown is Rizhao City, Shandong Province, a beautiful city by the seaside. I've been here for almost 20 years. I love my hometown very much while looking forward to future adventures in the distance.

I've been curious about the blue sky since I was a little boy. I always dreamed to fly a plane up to the sky, far above the ground, close to the clouds, looking down at the marvelous mountains and rivers.

Today I have got an opportunity to make this dream my lifelong career, that is, to become a pilot in Shenzhen Airlines. I know this is not easy. I still have a long way to go before I'm a real pilot but I would love to go all out for this goal.

追问

朋友，第三段第一句你漏了一词，能麻烦补上吗，后面：that is, to become a pilot，是正确的吗，谢谢

追答

that is = that is to say，是个常用表达法，意思是“即，也就是说，”解释前面的某个词。
所以在这里的正确的。相当于：
Today I have got an opportunity to make this dream my lifelong career, that is to say, I have got an opportunity to become a pilot in Shenzhen Airlines.

追问

dream与my lifelong之间没有少东西吗，become之类了？

追答

make something something让某事成为某事
这里的dream是名词
make this dream my lifelong career。让这个梦想成为我的终身职业。不用加become

He made me an idiot.
他让我成了个傻子（就是他让我显得很愚蠢）。

They made the country a great place to live in.
他们让这个国家成为一个非常适合生活的地方。

追问

太感谢了！等晚上可能还会问你一点哈。请不要介意

追答

后加的那段英语基本上合格，适当调整一下可以更地道：
Good morning. I'm excited but also a bit nervous as well to be here for this interview. （我兴奋但却有点小小的紧张。这种描述很真实。比你干巴巴说一句人人都会说的I'm glad to be here要有特点。并且这样的开场白会让面试官会心一笑。如果你真的紧张，他们反而会安慰你。所以这种说法很讨巧。能帮你一开始就获得好感）。那句let me introduce myself实在是纯属废话，可以省略。My name is Ma Ji. I'm 22 years old.I graduated from ... in July 2014.

There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and me. （后面我是独生子就不用提了。三口之家，很明显我是独生子）。We love each other very much. My father is running a stone factory. 后面那句话my mother stay inside all the time是病句。如果你要说我妈妈全职在家呆着。应该是My mother is a full-time housewife. We live happily together.（这句话比你I have a very happy family要地道。童话里，都是说，从此，王子和公主幸福滴生活在一起。They live happily together）

Answer 4

My hometown is Rizhao, Shandong Province, it is a beautiful seaside city.I have lived there for nearly 20 years, I love my hometown, but I am full of expectation for a far distance as well.
I was full of curiosity for the blue sky since I was a child, I always dreamed of flying a plane in the sky, be away from the surface of the earth, be close to the clouds, to overlook the great mountains and rivers.
Today I have a chance to make this dream as the career which I will strive for in the future, that is to become a pilot of Shenzhen Airlines, I know this is not that easy, it is still a long distance between the one who I am and a real pilot, but I am willing to do everything I can to make my goal achieved.

希望可以帮到你，并希望你有出色的发挥。

Answer 5

My hometown is Shandong Province, Rizhao City, a beautiful seaside city. I live near 20 years here, I love my hometown, but I also toward the distant full of expectation. I grew up on the blue sky full of curiosity, I always dream of flying a plane to fly the sky, away from the surface, close to the clouds, overlooking the mountains and water (beautiful rivers and mountains of a country). Today I have a chance to make this dream become the next (to fight) career, that is to become a pilot air Shenzhen, I know it is not an easy thing, now I distance a real pilot very for a long distance, but I am willing to pay all for this goal.