Question

英语改错题

We have a party last Sunday.During the party ,I made my way the bathroom and closed the door before me .A minute or two late,the little girl opened the bathroom door and walked in .I was still sit ."Don't you know if little girls aren't supposed to come into the bathroom when a little boy is using it!"I shouted.The little girl was shocked by my being at there. Then she started to cry.She quick closed the door,ran to the kitchen ,and tearfullly complained to her parents and my grandmother .Most of the party-goer had overheard my loud remark and were greatly amused by it.有10个错误，希望可以写出错的原因，谢谢各位了

Answer 1

We have (改为had) a party last Sunday.During the party ,I made my way (加上to) the bathroom and closed the door before (改为in front of) me .A minute or two late (加上later),the little girl opened the bathroom door and walked in .I was still sit (改为sitting) ."Don't you know if (if改为that) little girls aren't supposed to come into the bathroom when a little boy is using it!"I shouted.The little girl was shocked by my being at (去掉at) there. Then she started to cry.She quick (改为quickly) closed the door, (加上and) ran to the kitchen ,and tearfullly complained to her parents and my grandmother .Most of the party-goer(加s) had overheard my loud remark and were greatly amused by it.

追问

错的原因可以解释一下么。。能不能稍微快一点？？？？急~~~~~

追答

1.时态错误 应该是一般过去时
2.make one's way to 去往某处
3.位置上在...前面用in front of before表示时间上的前面
4.时间+later 多少多少时间以后
5.过去进行时 正坐在那儿
6.that引导的宾语从句
7.there前面不加介词
8.形容动作的状语 用副词形式quickly
9.谓语动词之间的并列 应该加and
10.不只一个人参加了聚会 应该用复数

Answer 2

We 【had】a party last Sunday.During the party ,I made my way【to】 the bathroom and closed the door 【behind】 me .A minute or two 【later】,【a 】little girl opened the bathroom door and walked in .I was still 【sitting】 ."Don't you know 【that】little girls aren't supposed to come into the bathroom when a little boy is using it!"I shouted.The little girl was shocked by my being 【去掉at】 there. Then she started to cry.She 【quickly】 closed the door,ran to the kitchen ,and tearfullly complained to her parents and my grandmother .Most of the 【party-goers】 had overheard my loud remark and were greatly amused by it.
1排.have-had
2.my way the bathroom-my way to the bathroom
3.before-behind
4.late-later
5.the little girl- a little girl
6.sit-sitting
7.if-that
8.my being at there-at去掉
9.quick-quickly
10.party-goer-party-goers

Answer 3

have ---had
late --later
being 后面去掉at
quick-quickly
剩下的楼下补充

Answer 4

have had