用英语写五年前的学校和现在的对比
写作思路：首先描述一下五年前学习的样子，然后在详细介绍一下现在学习的样子，中心要明确等等。
正文：
Five years ago, the school had only a row of dilapidated low brick
houses, no playground, no garden. The classroom was also strewn with
wood to support the roof that was about to fall. In retrospect, it's
really incredible. I don't know how they learned in the harsh
environment of "mud on sunny days and ashes on rainy days".
五年前的学校只有一排破旧低矮的砖瓦房，没有操场、花园。教室内还横七竖八地支着木头撑住要往下掉的房顶。现在回想起来真的是不可思议，在那“晴天一身泥、雨天一身灰”的恶劣环境不知他们是怎样学习的。
Now the school began to rebuild, because it was built on the original basis, a beautiful new teaching building rose, a total of 12 classrooms on three floors, pink tiles, white walls and tall flagpoles, surrounded by walls. All these changes excite us.
现在的学校开始改建，由于是在原来的基础上新建，一座漂亮的新教学楼拔地而起一共三层12间教室，粉红的瓷砖、雪白的墙壁及挺拔的旗杆，四周围还有围墙。这一切变化无不使我们振奋不已。
After we moved into the new classroom, the teacher took the senior students to carry bricks and build gardens, pools and rockeries. In front of the teaching building, lawn was paved, Osmanthus fragrans, pine and other plants were planted, and peony, chuanchuanhong, golden chrysanthemum, Gladiolus and other beautiful plants were planted in the flower beds.
在我们搬进新教室以后，学校老师又带着高年级的同学运砖台土修建了花园、水池、假山。在教学楼前还铺上了草坪，栽上了桂花树、松树等植物，花坛内种上了芍药、串串红、金丝菊、剑兰等好看的花草。
Now, our school is full of green grass and flowers all year round. The
beautiful campus has become a beautiful scenery deep in the mountains.
It adds infinite vigor and vitality to my hometown.
现在，我们的学校一年四季绿草如茵、鲜花不断。美丽的校园已成为大山深处一道亮丽的风景。为家乡增添了无限的生机和活力。
《Our new school》
《我们的新学校》
People often say, "everything flows, nothing lives." It's the same with my campus. It's changed a lot. If you don't believe it, I'll show you!
人们常说：“一切都在流动，没有停止。”我的校园也是如此。变化很大。如果你不相信，我就给你看！
When I just entered the first grade of primary school, the school was still very monotonous: there were no colorful wall tiles; There is no spacious gymnasium; It's not beautiful at all.
刚上小学一年级的时候，学校还是很单调：没有五颜六色的墙砖；没有宽敞的体育馆；一点也不漂亮。
Now, my school has changed a lot. Standing outside the door of the school, you will see the six characters "Dongcheng Experimental Primary School" written on the door.
现在，我的学校发生了很大的变化。站在学校门外，你会看到门上写着“东城实验小学”六个字。
Entering the campus, you will see three teaching buildings: Zhaohui building, Yuyang building and Rixin building, each of which is dressed in beautiful new clothes, wall tiles.
走进校园，你会看到三栋教学楼：朝晖楼、育扬楼和日新楼，每栋教学楼都穿着漂亮的新衣，贴着墙砖。
Our school has also built a new gymnasium.
我们学校还建了一个新体育馆。
The inscription on the gymnasium also says our school motto: make progress every day, sunshine all your life. Our school also has some special courses.
体育馆上的碑文还写着我们的校训：日新月异，阳光普照一生。我们学校还有一些特殊的课程。
At the westernmost end of the campus, there is a small vegetable garden with radish, cabbage, green onion and other vegetables.
在校园最西端，有一个小菜园，里面种着萝卜、白菜、葱等蔬菜。
All these add a lot of color to our campus, and make our after-school life more sunny.
所有这些都为我们的校园增添了许多色彩，使我们的课余生活更加阳光明媚。
Let's talk about our classroom. In the past, the ground was rugged, the bookcase was empty, and there were no potted plants on the windowsill.
让我们谈谈我们的教室。过去，地面崎岖不平，书柜空空荡荡，窗台上没有盆栽。
But now, our bookcase is full of students' books, the ground is also porcelain tiles. You see, how much has changed!
可现在，我们的书柜里堆满了学生的书，地上也是瓷砖。你看，发生了多大的变化！
英语作文写作技巧
1、灵活改变句子开头
在通常情况下，英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”，即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式，比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等，会使文章增强表现力。
2、避免重复使用词语
为了使表达更生动，更富表现力，同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字，就会立刻想起like，事实上，英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多，如enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。
3、合理使用省略句
合理恰当地使用省略句，不仅可以使文章精练、简洁，而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。
4、运用非谓语结构
非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构，适当运用非谓语结构，会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。
5、结合使用长、短句
在英语写作中，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是，根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。
你可以用 Five years ago，my school is.........（写五年前你学校的状况，可以用形容词） Nowadays，my school is..........（写现在你的学校的状况）的句型
开头可以是My school has made a big change in five years（我的学校在五年内有了很大的变化）
结尾可以是As you can see,my school is ....(围绕你的叙述填一个形容词) today .
加油，我相信你写得出来的
