Question

哪里错了

I once had a very happy family,but now everything have changed of my father. He used to be a very good doctor and was often praising by his patients .He took good care of the family and does homework every day.

Answer 1

1，everything 后面的have 改成has，因为everything要看成单数名词。
2，changed （because）of my father,因为看整句话的意思，表示的是“因为我的父亲，所以有所改变”，because of 表原因。
3，praising,改成praised ,这里表达的意思是被动意义，was +pp(过去分词),因此改为被动的praised.
4,homework 改为housework，homework的意思是作业，多指学校里 老师给学生布置的作业，而从文章中可以理解出，他父亲做的是家务，也就是housework。
5，took good care中的took改为takes,因为句尾出现every day，表示天天都这样，应用一般现在时。

希望你满意哟~

Answer 2

everything has changed because of my father
He used to be a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients
.He took good care of the family and did housework every day.

Answer 3

have--has
of前加because

praising--praised
dose--did
homework--housework

Answer 4

我觉着就这3处有点毛病，看其他高手吧。
I once had a very happy family,but now everything have changed [because] of my father. He used to be a very good doctor and was often prais[ed] by his patients .He took good care of the family and [did] homework every day.

Answer 5

I once had a very happy family,but now everything (has) changed (by) my father. He used to be a very good doctor and was often (praised) by his patients .He took good care of the family and (did) (housework) every day.

Answer 6

感觉怎么是韩语式句子？