Question

英语大神来，帮我看看这个 句子有哪些错误，该怎么改？

If I could turn the clock back, I hope you did not appear in my life.because I can't make myself to stop loving you since I was met you，and I don't know how to just be a friend with the girl who made me fall in love with her at the first sight.

中文意思是：
如果时光可以倒流，我希望你不曾出现在我的生命里，因为从遇见你的那一刻起我就无法让自己不爱你，而且我也不知道该怎样和一个我一见钟情的女孩仅仅只做朋友。

Answer 1

since I was met you的was去掉
fall in love with her这里面fall改成fallen，要用过去分词形式，另外把最后的her去掉，the girl who made me fall in love with成分已经完整了，her是多余的

其他没什么问题，望采纳

追问

就这样了吗？最后好像一见钟情没用去啊made me fallen in love with first sight.这样对不对？

追答

at first sight.是对的，是这样用的
fall in love at first sight就是一见钟情的正确表达方式（把the去掉就是了）

追问

再问一下，appear用不用换成appeared，还是如果用never 才接appeared。did not 就接appear？这里用never 或者did not 哪个表达更有意境一点啊？

追答

I hope you did not appear in my life不换也是可以的，因为前面有助动词did，所以后面不用过去式
如果要换的，换成I hope you never appeared in my life，这些表达也要流畅些
建议你换成I hope you never appeared in my life
因为never表示从不态度更坚决一些，更能突出你这里的感情

追问

感谢老师的无私解答。你太腻害了~~~我这种英语学渣只有膜拜的份啊~~

追答

不用客气，能帮助你是我的荣幸~
祝你学习进步！

追问

加你好友吧，有问题可以直接找你来解答啊。另外我不是学生。都工作两年了。喜欢了一个文艺咖的妹子，英语特好，我也得加油。。。

追答

好的啊~那你加油咯，看你这么拼，祝你早日梦想成真咯~

i can't make myself to stop那个to也去掉，make sb do sth不加to的。。。完了一开始居然没看到。。

Answer 2

If I could turn back the clock , I hope you never appeared in my life, because from the moment I met you I can't let myself do not love you, and I don't know how to just be a friend with the girl who I fall in love at first sight .

Answer 3

If I go back in time, I hope you never appeared in my life, because I meet you from the moment I can't let oneself do not love you, and I don't know how to make friends with a girl who I fall in love at first sight only.