Question

假设你将代表初三毕业生在毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点如下： 回顾 校园很美丽；

假设你将代表初三毕业生在毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点如下： 回顾 校园很美丽；每学期有丰富多彩的活动，例如，去年地震过后，学校组织了捐款活动；老师教学生动有趣；三年来学到很多，进步大。 感谢 老师的培养，父母的支持，同学的帮助 祝愿 我希望…… 1. 发言稿须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 最后一个要点适当发挥1~2句；3. 词数80个左右，发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Good afternoon, everyone! It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2012. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Our school is very beautiful. We have colorful activities every term. For example, our school made a donation after the earthquake last year. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years. We should thank our teachers for their teaching, our parents for their support, and our classmates for their help. I hope our school will be more beautiful and everyone will have a good time here.

这篇书面表达是根据要点来写的，所以主要把要点都表达出来，注意单词拼写正确，语法没有问题，适当使用恰当的句型。前面的回顾和感谢主要是结合要点进行阐述，最后的祝愿是学生根据自己的情况进行发挥，表现学生发散思维的能力。写作时注意不同时态的运用，例如回顾阶段，主要是过去时，表示感谢时主要用一般现在时，祝愿当然用一般将来时了。在范文中，一些词组和句型的运用值得学习，made a donation “捐赠”make their lessons lively and interesting“使课堂生动有趣” made great progress“取得很大的进步” We should thank our teachers for their teaching, our parents for their support, and our classmates for their help.这句话用的是排比的关系。