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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师，要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师，要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Water is very important to us, without that there would be no life. We couldn’t live if we didn’t have water. Therefore, some people don’t turn the tap off at once after using it. Some people don’t realize they wash them in the shower too long. Some even throw away bottles full in water. As middle school students, we should make great efforts to save water. On one hand, every single person’s save water is significance. On other hand, we can use some water we just used to watering plants. We shouldn’t leave the tap running for while we brush our tooth.

Answer 1

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1. that 改为which，在定语从句中介词后面的关系代词不可以用that。 2. didn’t改为don’t，这里if引导的是真实条件句，这个上下文都是用一般现在时的。 3. Therefore改为However， therefore意为因此，通过上下文可知前后应为转折关系。 4. them改为themselves，wash themselves洗他们自己。 5. in改为of，短语be full of 固定搭配。 6. save改为saving，save water 做主语，改用ing形式，every single person’s 做它的逻辑主语。 7. significance改为significant，这里做表语，该用形容词。 8. 加定冠词the， on the other hand固定短语搭配。 9. watering改为water，use sth to do sth的结构，其中we just used做定语从句修饰water。 10. tooth改为teeth，该用复数形式。