Question

今天是你好朋友Lucy的生日,她邀请你晚上到她家参加她的生日晚会.请你根据以下提示写一篇50词的短文

以“Lucy is birthday party “为题
提示1.You buy her a CD
2.You dance, sing and play games
3.You have a good time. 初一的

Answer 1

Lucy's birthday is coming,which because Lucy will hold her party.And her birthday party will be a great fun. I bought a CD as a present for her, and she will be extremelly happy for that. We are going to dance in the party at her home.We will sing and play games together happily as well.We will be certainlly have a good time.这是将来时的
你把题搬过来的时候省略了很多东西 我无法确定这是发生了的还是没发生的
用将来时还是过去式你自己审题吧
过去式的：
Lucy's birthday was coming,which because Lucy held her party.And her birthday party was a great fun. I bought a CD as a present for her, and she was extremelly happy for that. We danced in the party at her home.We sang and played games together happily as well.We will had a really good time.What a happy day!
这两篇作文任何一篇对于初一生来说能拿高分！我开头用来对于初一来说相当有难度的定语从句（不适合你的话就自己改改吧），老师会有好印象。
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难了. 好多没学

追答

把第一句改成 Lucy will hold her party at home becauseLucy's birthday is coming.去掉第二句 就ok了

Answer 2

题目有问题吧，应该是Lucy’s birthday party。
I am very happy that you invite me to come to you birthday party.I know you like music a lot,so I want to sent you a CD.I will dance ,sing and play games in the party.I believe I will have a good time