Question

高中英语短文改错，急

每处错误修改仅限1词 ，只允许修改10处 A man was used to play the piano in a bar.He played very well that many people came to hear him play .But one night, the boss told him,Some customers are tired of listen to the piano.If you want get paid,sing song!They are expecting you sing instead of playing. He had never sung songs in public before,so he had to sing a song.To his surprised,it turned out to be a succes.Everyone moved by the song"Mona,Monailsa"he sang this time.Nobady had never heard so beautiful a song before!He might have lived the rest of her life as a common piano playerin a bar,but for this time on,he went on to become one of the best known singers 答对有谢哦、

Answer 1

A man (was去掉) used to play the piano in a bar.He played very well that many people came to hear (him改为his) play .But one night, the boss told him,Some customers (are改为were) tired of (listen改为listening) to the piano.If you want (to) get paid,sing song!They are expecting you sing instead of (playing改为sing). He had never sung songs in public before,so he had to sing a song.To his (surprised改为surprise),it turned out to be a succes.Everyone (was)moved by the song"Mona,Monailsa"he sang this time.Nobady had (never 改为ever)heard so beautiful a song before!He might have lived the rest of her life as a common piano playerin a bar,but (for改为from) this time on,he went on to become one of the best known singers

追问

这个准确吗?

Answer 2

1. play-->playing
2. very-->so
3. listen-->listening
4. want-->want to
5. expecting you-->expecting you to
6. so--->but
7. surprised-->surprise
8. moved-->was moved
9. never--->ever
10. for this time on-->from this time on

还有，倒数第二行the rest of 后面应该是his,是你打错了吗？

追问

没有错哦，这个答案准确吗？

追答

我认为我这个是最准确的了。顺便问一下，原文中the boss told him后面有引号吧？如果没有的话，错还会增加几个。

追问

嗯嗯，有的哦，谢谢了。

Answer 3

play----playing listen---listening surprised--surprise succes--success moved的前面加上was
Nobady --Nobody so beautiful a song ---a song so beautiful