Question

英语作文对于出国的一些看法 非常简单 请帮忙！！！

studying abroad

要求：

Nowadays
more and more parents are eager to send their little children to study abroad
before they finish high school. It is quite understandable for parents to send
their children to study overseas because they place high expectations on their
children. Companies and institutions at home are giving more and more emphasis
on overseas experiences, too. Thus, pursuing overseas study became a kind of
short cut in gaining a better future. But not all families can afford the huge
cost for their children’s overseas study, especially for the children who have
to study abroad for many years. Moreover, some students may be too young to
restrain themselves and are likely to commit crimes abroad.

What
do you think of studying abroad before finishing high school in China and when
do you think is the best time for people to study abroad?

1、按英语作文格式书写；

2、说明核心观点并进行阐述；

3、英文字数控制在400-500个单词；

Answer 1

题目 Should I Study Abroad?

Every year thousands and thousands of people leave the comforts of their homes to learn English in countries such as the United States, Canada, England, and Australia. Why do they do it? Many feel that by studying a language in a country where it is spoken, they will be able to learn it more quickly. Others feel that studying abroad gives them a kind of prestige in their home country. It may even lead to a better job. And quite a few people want to study abroad for the pure pleasure and excitement it brings.

But living and studying in another country can also have its problems. Almost everyone experiences some level of homesickness. And a few people go home earlier than expected because their ideas about living in another country were different from reality.

Is learning English abroad something you are interested in? Whether to learn a language by studying abroad is a big decision. You should be aware of what you are getting into before you start packing your bags.

Disadvantages of Studying Abroad

Studying abroad does not mean you will learn English magically. Many people think that they just need to live in another country and they will learn the local language. This is not completely true. You still need to pay attention and study. There are people who live in foreign countries for many, many years without knowing the language well. However, it will probably come to you easier and faster than if you just studied the language in your home country.

Studying abroad can be hard. You will probably have times when you miss your family, friends, food, and everything familiar. Almost everyone goes through some culture shock （文化冲击）. You will have to realize and accept that it will take some time to adjust to a new way of living.

Studying abroad can be expensive. There is no doubt that it takes money to study abroad. It can vary from kind of expensive to very expensive. Most places don't allow international students to work. You will have to have the money before you arrive in the country or have someone from home support you. Is this something that you and/or your family can afford?

Advantages of Studying Abroad

You are surrounded by English. Yes, you need to pay attention and do some studying, but everything comes faster when you do because English is everywhere— on the streets, in the stores, on the TV —you can't get away from it.

Your eyes are opened to the world. We often grow up thinking that our way of doing things is the only way, or sometimes the best way. But living in a new culture helps us realize new ways of doing things, and also helps us to see that even though we are different, we are all human. And in many cases, not only will you get to know the natives of the country you are visiting, you may get to know classmates from all over the world.

You learn to take care of yourself. Living in another country, even if it is with a host family（寄宿家庭）, means you might be doing things you may not have done in your home country. These include cooking, cleaning, grocery shopping, washing clothes, figuring out （弄明白）transportation, making living arrangements, setting up accounts for cell phones and utilities, etc. You may think of this as a disadvantage, but many international students go home proud that they have become very self sufficient （自给自足；自立的能力）.

Your life will be forever changed. One of the greatest things that happens when you do something as big as live in another country is— you become a changed person — your outlook on life is different. Your new maturity can help lead you to new places in your life.

You make memories that will last a lifetime. Your pictures, journals, and souvenirs will help you remember your time abroad, but your memories and emotions of this special time will also be a part of your life until you are very old.

So how can you know if studying abroad is right for you? First, start by talking to people who have already done it. Of course everyone will have his or her own experience and point of view, but it can be really helpful to hear what other people have to say. If you don't know anyone who has studied abroad, ask others about their experiences through the internet. Dave's ESL Cafe is a good place to start.

If you do decide that you are interested in going abroad, take a look at websites like and to search for schools and get advice on where to go.

Studying abroad can really change your life. And hopefully if you decide to do it, it will be a wonderful experience for you. The very best of luck to you.
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Answer 2

英国人看作文，看三部分。Task .Organisation和Language. Task 就不说了。就是要切题。Organisation 很重要，分为introduction、mainbody。 conclusion。 在introduction中 分为四部分 general speaking。 就是很宽泛的讲一下。比如说题目是大家出国都要学英语，那么第一句话可能就要说，随着经济的发展越来越多的人出国读书了。第二句话就要 a little specific, 里题目更近点。然后就要 thesis statement .也就是你的观点。可以说This eaasy aims to show that ... 最后就是 outline，就是介绍下文章要说的内容。。it will outline that。。。， and then it will go on to ... , finally, it will evaluate....
然后就是 mainbody。 你作文能6.5 Language,肯定不是问题。mainbody 就好好写不要有语法错误，尽量写的simple 。不要追求太多的复杂句，主要是写的简明易懂。
Conclusion. 包括 summary 和 conclusion 加 evaluate 和 suggestion. summary,就是把文章写的什么简单说下，再总结下说出你自己的观点。。 在评价下好坏。 提出建议。。差不多就是这样了。全手打啊。
对了， 还要多加signposting language.