Question

帮我看看这句话有语病吗？I'm just a sunflower, waiting for bel

帮我看看这句话有语病吗？I'm just a sunflower, waiting for belongs to my only sunshine.

Answer 1

有错误,waiting for后习惯跟名词、代词,belong to是动词词组,此处没必要用.所以这句可改为I'm just a sunflower,waiting for my only sunshine./ I'm just a sunflower,waiting for the sunshine which belongs to me

Answer 2

I'm just a sunflower, waiting for belongs to my only sunshine.

黑体处错误，改为：

I am just a sunflower, waiting for my only sunshine to which I belong.

Answer 3

不要加上belongs to 意思是一样的

Answer 4

belong不用加s

Answer 5

你想写什么意思？

追问

我只是一朵向日葵，等待着属于我的唯一的阳光

追答

I'm just a sunflower waiting for the only Ray of sunshine that belongs to me.