Question

能帮我做一下这几篇英语改错吗？谢谢了！

1 When father bought me a computer as a birthday present in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers are getting more usefully nowadays. Mush information can be stored in it. We can learn that has lately happened in the world on the Internet. In the past, people had to do lots of work which were very dangerous. Now, computers can do it instead. When the exam is coming, I do exercise on my computer. Then it will correct them but tell me the right answers. It is more convenient for me prepare for the exam than before. The computer have become a real firend of mine.

2 Many a teacher are worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television as they soeed in school. Because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries mush about the reading radio programme young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials. They are all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.

Answer 1

1 When father bought me a computer as a birthday present in(去掉in) last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers are getting more usefully(改useful) nowadays. Mush information can be stored in it(改them). We can learn that(改what) has lately happened in the world on(改in) the Internet. In the past, people had to do lots of work which were(改was) very dangerous. Now, computers can do it instead. When the exam is coming, I do exercise on my computer. Then it will correct them but(改and) tell me the right answers. It is more convenient for me (加to)prepare for the exam than before. The computer have(改has) become a real firend of mine.

2 Many a teacher are(改is) worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television as(改than) they soeed in school. Because(加of) so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of read(改reading) and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries mush about the reading radio programme(改programmes) young people listen to, although radios can be very noise(改noisy). Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On(改Within) one year the(改an) average child will see 25,000 television commercials. They are all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to(去掉to) want things that they don't real(改really) need.