Question

求能批改英语作文的网站

我记得原来好象星火英语可以，但现在找不到了。帮忙给一个能批改英语作文的网站啊？收费的也行，别太高了，明年要高考了，我英语一塌糊涂，得恶补作文啊。求助各位大侠。顺便帮忙把这片作文批改一下
It was fine last sunday. We went to the west hill by bus to plant trees.some students plant trees, other sudents carry water. we were work hard. we were very tired but we were very happy. Because we all know our work very good. plant trees can stop sand from blow into city and make our city more beautiful.

Answer 1

我们老师叫我们在www.pigai.org这个网站写作文，不收费，只要注册就可以了，有批改还有评分，不错的网站。
It was fine last sunday. We went to the west hill by bus to plant trees.some students plant trees, while others carry water. we worked hard. we were very tired but we were happy very much. Because we all know our work is meaningful. Planting trees can stop sand from blow into city and make our city more beautiful.
希望对你有所帮助。

Answer 2

1.第三句some应大写，句首的词都应大写，一定要注意。还有，时态。。。既然是上周，那肯定应用过去式。
2.第四句，be动词后不能直接加动词原形，要么在work后加上ing，要么were去掉，work改为其过去式worked。
3.接下来，"plant trees can stop....",有没有想过句子里你的主语是? 所以应该在plant后加上ing，动词+ing变为名词，planting trees做主语，还有就是这句中的stop，stop sth from doing.....这是固定搭配，所以blow应改为blowing。
希望可以帮到你！！！

追问

stop sth from doing 是什么意思额？

追答

stop...from doing.....
sth是something,意思就是接名词

Answer 3

不知道能批改英语作文的网站.以下改写供参考.
你写的是上个星期日的事情,要用过去时态.写完作文要认真检查.注意大小写常用词汇和句型的基本用法.
It was fine last Sunday. We went to the West Hill by bus to plant trees.Some students planted trees, other sudents carried water. We worked very hard. We felt very tired but we were very happy because we all knew that we did a good job and what we did is meanignful.Planting trees can stop sand from blowing into our city and making our it more beautiful.

追问

Planting trees can stop sand from blowing into our city and making our it more beautiful

这里的making为什么要用ing形式？

追答

stop ......from doing 是固定搭配,阻止的意思,类似的词组还有
prevent ...from,
keep ....from
from是介词,介词后要跟名词,人称代词的宾格,如果是动词,就要跟动词的ing形式,也叫动名词

追问

这里make和can是并列的成分吧？

追答

最后一句话应该写成Planting trees can stop sand from blowing into our city and make it more beautiful.
stop 和make 是并列谓语

Answer 4

It was fine last sunday. We went to the west hill by bus to plant trees.Some students planted trees, others carried water. We were working hard. We were very tired but very happy. Because we all know our work very good,planting trees can stop sand from blowing into city and making our city more beautiful.

好久不改了 不会啊

Answer 5

你下一个 易改 的软件吧。有点用处，修正作文的