Question

短文改错 共8处错误

Dear Helen ,
Thank you very much for invite us to your apartment last weedend.We enjoy the party greatly ,singing and talking .In this letter,I'm sending you photo of your wonderful stay there. I hope you will like them . They remind me with the happy hours when we spent together. At this moment I am busy with my lesson ,for the final
exams are coming. I must do good in the exams. Thanks again and I wish you all the best.

Answer 1

1. invite改为inviting，介词后用动名词
2. weedned改为weekend，单词拼写错误
3. enjoy改为enjoyed，过去时
4. photo 改为photos，照片要用复数，因为下文说到 I hope you will like them.
5. your改为our，是我们在一起的照片
6. with the happy hours的with改为of，remind sb. of sth. 要用of
7. the happy hours when 中的when改为that或者省略，因为定语从句中缺少spent的宾语，必须用关系代词that（作从句宾语时可省略）而非关系副词when
8. lesson改为lessons，功课不止一门功课
9. good改为well，修饰动词do要用副词well

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Answer 2

Dear Helen ,
Thank you very much for [invite--inviting ] us to your apartment last weedend.We [enjoy--enjoyed ] the party greatly ,singing and talking .In this letter,I'm sending you [photo--photos] of [your--our] wonderful stay there. I hope you will like them . They remind me [with--of ] the happy hours [when--that/which] we spent together. At [this--the] moment I am busy with my lesson ,for the final
exams are coming. I must do [good--well] in the exams. Thanks again and I wish you all the best.

Answer 3

invite-inviting enjoy- enjoyed photo-photos will-would remind-reminded when-that for-because
good-well

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Answer 4

1.invite改为inviting;
2. enjoy改为 enjoyed；