Question

写一篇以‘a letter to my grandmother’为题的英语作文。

本题目的写作要求为；假如你叫scott，刚收到了期末成绩单，请你写一封信告诉奶奶成绩单上的内容。写作时注意书信的书写格式。本文要求用到一下短语；yesterday昨天，report card成绩单，math--hard-wording数学--努力，spanish--good at speaking西班牙语--口语良好，history--can do better历史--还能做得更好，science--lazy student科学--懒惰的学生。（本文为英语新目标初二下四单元的作文，请根据初中能力来写本文)
非常感谢 跪求

Answer 1

A letter to my grandmother
Dear grandmother,I know you know the six languges.I just know the two languages until now.One is English,two is spanish.I got your letter yesterday.I was so happy to tell you my report card not very bad,I was too hard working for the math,I don't like the maths,but I like spanish,I was good at speaking to the spanish.Wuwu,my history I think will be better in the future.I like history,I can know the America business for learning.My science was not very good,haha,I think I don't can to be a scientist,so I have a little lazy,I am a lazy student.I miss you so much,my kindly grandmother,I miss you dumpling.So delicious.

BR
Scott
6/2/2013

Answer 2

Dear grandmother
i have just received my report card yesterday and i write to you to tell you about my study. I need hard-working on my math. I am good at speaking Spanish. I can do better in my history. And in science, i am a totally lazy student. It seems that i need to work harder on my study next term

Yours sincerely
Scott

追问

你可不可以写这篇作文加点润色啊 谢啦

追答

Dear grandmother
How are you! It is your lovely grandson Scott here. Actually I have just received my report card yesterday and i am writing to you to tell you about my study. I suppose i need to work harder on my math. Fortunately, i am quite good at Spanish. My Spanish speaking is pretty good. As for my history, i think i can do better. It is a pity that i seem to be a lazy student in my science. As you see, i decide to work harder in my math,history and science. I will come to visit you as soon as i am free.
Best wishes

Yours sincerely
Scott